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Written, November 8, 2025
For The Contest, “My November Challenge: 
An Ode to _______(ONE STANZA ONLY) Poetry”
Sponsor, Andrea Dietrich

Ode To My Eyes

My eyes are deep brown, oval shape and eyelashes long, seem to gape some said like a doe with sparkle and glow smooth eyelids with no lines of crepe Though that was a long time ago when youth kind of did steel the show Today, somewhat bright though lids not as tight they glimmer for age apropos!
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November 16, 2025 at 5:23 PM
Very nice ode to your eyes, sparked with a bit of humor as well. Congrats in my contest, Sandra
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