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Ode to my dad on his 74th birthday

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A silly Alexandrine Ode, with some made up words and alliteration... Oh and my dad's name is Basil, BTW
Hungarious herbanamed hairchinned humanoid! This tungstanesk triumph – to some thanatoid… Mathematicos marvel: mention “nontotiet!” But Basil-based bullters bothered? Outbleat??? For functioning fully at family functions, requires restrained raconteurial unctions. Propensities/properties you outpossess. injurious idiot’s ill-conceived jest… No! Never negating nine-tenths of nonplussed, because Basil-boy, your bingeworthy bust, should stand sentry in stone for descendants yet born, And for you to admire, while mowing the lawn.

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