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Ode To My Cell Phone

without it im nothing i need it to be something it holds my friends and family with it i live happily i can do so many things with it even though when im without it, it sits it keeps me in touch it just does so much when i dont have it im naked i treat it like its sacred

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2009 3:24:00 PM

Welcome to PoetrySoup Steven. I hope to read more poetry from you. Love, Carol

Denis Joe

Date: 1/10/2009 2:47:00 AM

I like the dea of this; carrying on the tradition of odes to inanimate objects. Some of the rhymes come over as a bit forced (eg: family - happily) but overall I find the poem works well. The most telling line, for me, is 'i need it to be something' but the lack of capitalisation (for Cummings it suggested humility) seems to contradict the statement, whilst making the poem itself an object, doe not seem to raise the narration above the subject.

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Date: 1/8/2009 7:42:00 PM

this is wack. step up kid~