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Ode To An Orphan

i. Storm

darkness is a shade
stirring shadows afraid
then the zigzag plunges
agitating the cross
again and again sawing a thin line
blackberry wine
the brew of an angry soak
a curtain torn from top to bottom
the thunder ripping
high priest covers his ears
lest the truth storm in
unwanted like an orphan

 ii. Orphan

six feet under
with no mother nor father
a Ukranian wonder
curls and crown
become somebody’s daughter
no frown
shovel pats down the blunder

iii. Grave

this grave circumstance 
shown the door
He stands and knocks
her chance
America an amusement park
the plane her first ride
she’s beside
herself with excitement, a spark
in her step

iv. First Steps

she will take her first steps
the moon will watch
desiring the test soil
she’d have kissed it
with her wit
how many reps
strengthen the catch
watch out world
she belongs

10/14/2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 10/18/2020 5:06:00 AM
Really, beautiful and moving.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2020 6:33:00 AM
Thank you, Pangie! Based on a real little girl.
Date: 10/15/2020 3:44:00 AM
Amazing poetry, Kim. Intelligence mixed with poetry. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2020 4:26:00 AM
Thank you so much! Means the world to me!
Date: 10/15/2020 3:40:00 AM
Watch out world! Kim is “bringing it”. Wow! When I think your poetry cannot get any better you pen this!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2020 4:27:00 AM
You are the sweetest! <3

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