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Ode To a Whiny Doberman

Oh, you funny doggie, with that brown face I adore, why are you now making that sound that I can't ignore? Are you lonely? Are you sad? Are your paw paws feeling sore? No dog whisperer am I, so sometimes it’s a chore to understand your needs. My dog talk is so poor! Already I have fed you. You surely can’t want more. And already you’ve gone potty. I take you to the door. No, you won’t go out! You sniff and sniff the floor. At last I understand! It’s your ball you’re looking for! Here it is, my doggie. Now what tricks have you in store? Aug 16, 2018 for The Doberman Pinscher Contest of Edward Ibeh Inspired by this video: Link A: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cB9pVJ3mYcE

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Date: 8/19/2018 6:54:00 PM
This is one of the best monorhymes I have ever read Andrea! Not one forced line, as they all blend so seamlessly it doesn't even sound like a monorhyme... and that is a good thing! Big congrats on your first place deserving win! : )
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Date: 8/18/2018 11:05:00 PM
Congratulations on your $1 win.This is so cute! Your rhymes are perfect. Fun and real. Well done.
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Date: 8/18/2018 5:51:00 AM
Aww! My German Shepherd had perhaps forgotten me. I had been away in the Navy for three years. Went home for visit. He was old and on a chain. He would growl at me. Left alone with him and his ball went out of reach. He looked at me at the ball at me again. Of course I got it for him. Was a sweet moment for me. Hugs...Kim
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Date: 8/18/2018 4:40:00 AM
oh my sweet doggie, can you do the boogie? lovely poem...
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Date: 8/18/2018 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea, well deserved for a lovely poem. x
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Date: 8/18/2018 3:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea, well deserved for a lovely poem. x
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Date: 8/17/2018 10:02:00 PM
Congrats on taking the top spot with this cute poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:24:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:45:00 PM
TOO CUTE! Congrats on your top win, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 8/17/2018 5:32:00 PM
Nicely done, congratulations on your top win!
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Date: 8/17/2018 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Andrea! Congratulations for the top win with this amazing write!
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Date: 8/17/2018 4:04:00 PM
Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea.
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Date: 8/17/2018 3:33:00 PM
A delightful write, Andrea, and a sure winner! Congrats for being named to the Top Contest Poets for the past 6 months list! - Bob
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Date: 8/17/2018 1:39:00 PM
i love poems about dogs
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:16:00 PM
A delightfully playful write, Andrea. Guess you know the doberman's desires quite well by now. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Date: 8/17/2018 11:29:00 AM
A man's best friend is a dog they say, but a dogs best friend is a ball...lol Love it, Andrea!
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Date: 8/17/2018 7:14:00 AM
Adorable conversation..well done, Andrea.
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Date: 8/17/2018 6:29:00 AM
aww what a sweet interpretation of the theme:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/17/2018 3:46:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this well-written take on the theme, Andrea.
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Date: 8/17/2018 12:23:00 AM
Monorhymes are my favorite poems at this second, and because of this doggie monorhyme, Andrea. So nicely done! I love it.
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