Andrea Dietrich Poet Monorhyme

Ode To a Whiny Doberman

Oh, you funny doggie, with that brown face I adore,
why are you now making that sound that I can't ignore?
Are you lonely? Are you sad? Are your paw paws feeling sore?
No dog whisperer am I, so sometimes it’s a chore
to understand your needs. My dog talk is so poor!
Already I have fed you. You surely can’t want more.
And already you’ve gone potty. I take you to the door.
No, you won’t go out! You sniff and sniff the floor.
At last I understand! It’s your ball you’re looking for!
Here it is, my doggie. Now what tricks have you in store? 


Aug 16, 2018 for The Doberman Pinscher Contest of Edward Ibeh
Inspired by this video: Link A: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cB9pVJ3mYcE

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Connie Marcum Wong August 19, 2018 at 6:54 PM This is one of the best monorhymes I have ever read Andrea! Not one forced line, as they all blend so seamlessly it doesn't even sound like a monorhyme... and that is a good thing! Big congrats on your first place deserving win! : )

Susan Gentry August 18, 2018 at 11:05 PM Congratulations on your $1 win.This is so cute! Your rhymes are perfect. Fun and real. Well done.

Kim Rodrigues August 18, 2018 at 5:51 AM Aww! My German Shepherd had perhaps forgotten me. I had been away in the Navy for three years. Went home for visit. He was old and on a chain. He would growl at me. Left alone with him and his ball went out of reach. He looked at me at the ball at me again. Of course I got it for him. Was a sweet moment for me. Hugs...Kim

Jonathan Medida August 18, 2018 at 4:40 AM oh my sweet doggie, can you do the boogie? lovely poem...

Francesca Pappadogiannis August 18, 2018 at 3:41 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea, well deserved for a lovely poem. x

Francesca Pappadogiannis August 18, 2018 at 3:41 AM Congratulations on your win Andrea, well deserved for a lovely poem. x

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2018 at 10:02 PM Congrats on taking the top spot with this cute poem! Love, Carolyn

Jan Allison August 17, 2018 at 6:24 PM Dropping back with my congrats Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy August 17, 2018 at 5:45 PM TOO CUTE! Congrats on your top win, Andrea! Janice

Tania Kitchin August 17, 2018 at 5:32 PM Nicely done, congratulations on your top win!

Edward Ibeh August 17, 2018 at 4:11 PM Thank you so much for participating in my contest, Andrea! Congratulations for the top win with this amazing write!

Line Gauthier August 17, 2018 at 4:04 PM Congrats on your gold medal win, Andrea.

Robert L. Hinshaw August 17, 2018 at 3:33 PM A delightful write, Andrea, and a sure winner! Congrats for being named to the Top Contest Poets for the past 6 months list! - Bob

Marc Acrich August 17, 2018 at 1:39 PM i love poems about dogs

Carolyn Devonshire August 17, 2018 at 12:16 PM A delightfully playful write, Andrea. Guess you know the doberman's desires quite well by now. Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Charles Messina August 17, 2018 at 11:29 AM A man's best friend is a dog they say, but a dogs best friend is a ball...lol Love it, Andrea!

Vijay Pandit August 17, 2018 at 7:14 AM Adorable conversation..well done, Andrea.

Jan Allison August 17, 2018 at 6:29 AM aww what a sweet interpretation of the theme:-) hugs Jan xx

Wendy Watson August 17, 2018 at 3:46 AM I really enjoyed reading this well-written take on the theme, Andrea.

Caren Krutsinger August 17, 2018 at 12:23 AM Monorhymes are my favorite poems at this second, and because of this doggie monorhyme, Andrea. So nicely done! I love it.