Ode To a Singer Songwriter

Friday came and the workplaces
Surrendered their weary to the weekend
Tiredness dissipating as the precious days
Are contemplated with anticipation.

Another crowd of friendly murmur 
Gathers in the little upstairs room
Gloomy by day, evening transformed 
to a theatre within the music bar.

She arrives having travelled
With her instruments seen and unseen
Steps up on the stage again
Boots discarded, tippy toed pleasure.

The first gentle notes picked out 
Hush the gathering to respectful silence
As they cleanse the week from their souls
Embracing the soothing delicacy. 

Then the voice arrives
Chocolate velvet-smooth whiskey
Sweet strong intoxicating earfuls
Elevate spirits in ecstasy.

Two hours disappear in a thrice
A happy melancholy descends
Pleasurable attendance struggles
Against the tinge of sadness, it's over.

The artist remains to greet the grateful
Friendly chatter, CD signing
Soon we shuffle back to life's reality
Hoping she knows the joy she brings.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Nunez Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 12:00 PM
I always struggle with free verse, and so I gravitate toward poems written with such finesse one does not realize there's no rhyme because the words glide smoothly as I read them. This is a fitting ode to another artist. A 7 for your art, Brendan.
Osborne Avatar
May 13, 2015 at 1:19 PM
Kim, thank you so much for your very kind words. I am new on this site and have just recently starting writing. It is so encouraging to hear positive feedback. Free verse works for be because I don't feel the restriction of rhyme and can describe what I'm feeling using the words that I want to! :-) Take care, Brendan.
Ward Avatar
May 10, 2015 at 7:06 AM
I heard the sounds in that poem... Well done, Brendan.
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