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Ode To a San Francisco Head

It’s that beat
Bang!
arms around the porcelain
alter
shared by music gods
a plenty

The Smash!
drowns the sweetness
as the 
Boom!
carries away the wrong

with the Shrill!
stabilizing the united
chaos 
tears make their way  
to reddened arms and
Sizzle!
towards the heavens

now swaying with the
Ba Ba Ba!
images appear between
tears
where truth and purity
are found

collapsing to rest
with a sweaty
Slide!
upturned by reality
breathing hard is the 
Beat Beat Beat!
of paralysis

then dipped into the
icy mercy of a
Shout!
and then a muffled
trumpets prayer

only to awaken to
a deafening
Slam!
and an earth moving
Shake!
only then experience
takes hold

Sa Sa Wop!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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Oyewole Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 10:23 AM
Congrats on your win. AO
A   Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 7:27 PM
JUSTIN, congrats with your jazzy poem... luv~PD
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 4:54 AM
Many Congratulations xx
Delaney Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 8:03 PM
Best description of throwing up drunk I have read to date...oh and the hangover after...Very Jazzy.. Are you an Aussie? Congratulations on your win... SuZ
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