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Ode To a Love I'Ve Long Dreampt Of

I was a broken down man with many problems to sort You raised my head from the sand and stood me straight as a sword. I turned to clay in your hands indeed I need to be formed And all it took was the touch from a soul that is warm. Then right away from that day that you stepped in my life I started finding the strength that I had lacked for some time. I've had a long war with hurt which I could barely sustain But all the love that you give to me erases the pain. So now savior baby, oh lovely one, I need you all of my days I'll hold you tight, make sure all is right as we draw near and lock in loves embrace. If ever again I feel down and out and begin to feel incoming blues I'll simply glance up and be promptly perked up as my eyes retain a glimpse of you. So my lovely lady with angelic flesh I need you all of my life. I dream of a day in which I'll take you away and create you into a wife But until that day I'm not ashamed to say I'm content just holding your hands. You will be my everything and I'm forever your man. So my classy woman with the goddess eyes I dreamed of you for many years When you found me down with my head in the ground I knew I had nothing to fear. Right away I knew it was the day my troubled life had finally reached it's end With the ending of fear I began to see clear, it had to go, so true love could begin.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 3/9/2015 6:50:00 PM
This is a wonderfully romantic write. I see the ladies approve, that is a very good sign that you are on the right track.
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Date: 1/29/2015 7:17:00 PM
Very lovely write. What a lucky gal:). Great job!
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Date: 1/13/2015 5:27:00 PM
Aww this is so terrifically sweet! The strength this woman gives you is beautiful, keep that tongue saying great things and you will go far! I dig it :)
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Date: 1/12/2015 9:57:00 PM
I enjoyed the beauty of love in this poem. Thank you for sharing!
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