Ode to a Loan of Silver

Pale moon, a silver coin,
Dropped in the ink-well night,
You purchase fleeting dreams,
A loan of fragile light,
On a dark world below,
Where shadows softly creep,
A silent promise to keep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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November 9, 2025 at 2:55 PM
wow! loved 'a loan of fragile light.' This poem is stunning. faving
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