Ode To a Fallen Sparrow

Oh, dear Sparrow! Fallen still
Softly feathered where you lay
As of a soldier gently eased
To sleep in dreams away
Whose dying wish was lost, was lost
In wars of yesterday

Your folded wings are nestled close
Your uniform unmarred
There is no stain upon your coat
Nor mark upon your bars
It seems from battle you emerged
Without a battle scar

For there you are composed, serene
Your earthly visage calm
No sign of struggle or of strife
No specter of alarm
Nor outward damage I can see –
Within, then, be the harm

Where broken wounds internalize
Beyond the battlefield
Where kamikaze skirmishes
Could not survive the steel
And solid soundness of the pane
Which from you did not yield

To you then, fallen warrior
In tribute, hear my prayer –
That you may soar unbounded, free
With worry none, nor care
In everlasting flight on wings
As virtual as air –

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 2/20/2024 3:53:00 PM
Poor sweet fallen bird!/ Hardly anyone writes poems/ After your song stops :( (https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/little_bird_1497372)
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Date: 2/18/2024 11:24:00 PM
now i feel like... :( so sad! poor lil sparrow :(
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John Oldham
Date: 2/20/2024 3:13:00 PM
This was based on a true experience - poor lil bird :(
Date: 11/23/2023 11:02:00 PM
:)
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John Oldham
Date: 11/30/2023 4:16:00 AM
;)
Date: 4/9/2023 4:31:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful tribute. Great analogy, rhythm and rhyme. Love this, John.
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John Oldham
Date: 4/9/2023 4:21:00 PM
Thanks, Ryan. Appreciate it! Best - john
Date: 4/8/2023 5:42:00 PM
I really like this one, John. Great concept and rhyme. Nice job!
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John Oldham
Date: 4/9/2023 4:20:00 PM
Good to hear, Daniel! Thanks! Peace - john
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