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Ode On An Broken Friendship

My friend and I walked through an endless street Giving each other some great treats. Helped me in my sorrows and so did I Enjoyed with me in my joys and guess what, I did the same. We used to share all our secrets We were open books to each other. For others, the friendship was quiet a mystery But now it's just a history. We got apart from each other with a fight It was quiet stupid but he was right. That I can't find a friend like him But i can't do anything now except to write this beautiful hymn. It's just happened due to a small stupid fight. But now I've lost such a beautiful possession. I'll remember this beautiful friendship throughout my life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/17/2016 12:20:00 AM
please disregaurd last comment plz :0 :) thank you ibad khurum
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Date: 3/17/2016 12:19:00 AM
saba khan, i love to read poems more than once it helps me capture the hidden messages and refference the meaaning of the poem i didnt see the first time..
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Date: 1/14/2016 9:55:00 PM
IBAD, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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Date: 10/17/2010 10:55:00 AM
sad, how one fight can ruin such friendship, they are hard to come around, but at least you can remember them as they were, enjoyed this one Ibad,..P.D.
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Date: 10/17/2010 8:54:00 AM
Very touchy and creative on broken friendship, Ibad
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