Ode On An Broken Friendship

My friend and I walked through an endless street
Giving each other some great treats.
Helped me in my sorrows and so did I
Enjoyed with me in my joys and guess what, I did the same.
We used to share all our secrets
We were open books to each other.
For others, the friendship was quiet a mystery

But now it's just a history.
We got apart from each other with a fight 
It was quiet stupid but he was right.
That I can't find a friend like him
But i can't do anything now except to write this beautiful hymn.
It's just happened due to a small stupid fight.
But now I've lost such a beautiful possession.
I'll remember this beautiful friendship throughout my life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
December 8, 2024 at 11:13 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 17, 2016 at 12:20 AM
please disregaurd last comment plz :0 :) thank you ibad khurum
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March 17, 2016 at 12:19 AM
saba khan, i love to read poems more than once it helps me capture the hidden messages and refference the meaaning of the poem i didnt see the first time..
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January 14, 2016 at 9:55 PM
IBAD, Awesome write, I really like this. Forever ** SKAT **
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October 17, 2010 at 10:55 AM
sad, how one fight can ruin such friendship, they are hard to come around, but at least you can remember them as they were, enjoyed this one Ibad,..P.D.
Mehta Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 8:54 AM
Very touchy and creative on broken friendship, Ibad
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