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Day-glo dewy chuck berry faded daffodils woodlark fluid warble emerald chorus & abash earth drowsy petrichor on parched earth fall mist lyrics of glyphs thrum in sepia tones of whimpers & heart hums of lengthy boyhood & haunting echoes shattered bell's agonizing chimes In shadowy kaleidoscope dystopian swoon climax is symphonic & thunderous melancholy of tearful farewell remove dust mote of gramophone groove daily spirit sweep clean mental dust & embrace gratitude & love life's melody won't die eclectic idiosyncrasy happiness bid
Written: November 03, 2022

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Date: 11/4/2022 9:13:00 AM
A powerful expression of nature and ideas, my friend, Lasaad! Very well painted! Blessings!
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Date: 11/4/2022 5:22:00 AM
You convey sights and sounds--melodious as life and nature can be.
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Date: 11/4/2022 2:45:00 AM
A lively poem.
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