Oculus Space

stepping off planet earth, it’s quite a blast
astronaut rear ending walls
mission out of control

12/26/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brown Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 3:57 PM
Thanks Kim, Astronauts rear ending walls, LOL, They must have had a Christmas eve party on board. This was fun, great write ~ Debra
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:17 PM
Thanks, Debra! :)
Krutsinger Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 4:26 AM
"mission out of control" - this is why I will not be going up in space EVER.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:37 AM
Well, this was virtual reality…quite enough excitement for me!
Kendrick Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 1:52 PM
Laughter the best medicine. I got a chuckle. Thanks for the visit to my blog. I appreciate your time spent there and for the prayers. Wayne is healing. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2021 at 11:40 AM
Keep laughing, healing, praying, writing! Be blessed!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 9:15 AM
Hope all are well. I never forget the spacecraft that exploded with people on it. I saw it on TV. I almost cried.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2021 at 11:54 AM
I played a virtual reality game where you feel like you are on the international space station…feels real! I remember that explosion too…
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