October's Farewell Kiss

Soothed by her cool breeze
                          ....I stood alone
                                       ...amid the chittering of the falling leaves.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
November 9, 2023 at 10:21 AM
John, congrats and high fives for your win! Wonderful word usage - "chittering!" I can feel the cold, crisp air! Blessings to you!
Empress Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 11:40 AM
Love it. Congratulations. Well deserved win
Croft Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:58 AM
Congratulations
Goldsmith Avatar
November 8, 2023 at 8:50 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful October Monoku write. Enjoy your day/win writing away........
Empress Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 6:25 AM
This is so serene and beautiful! I love “ chittering of the falling leaves “ brilliant
Mcintosh Avatar
October 29, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Wonderful. God bless you. Happy October! Love and prayers, Gina
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