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October's Farewell Kiss

Soothed by her cool breeze ....I stood alone ...amid the chittering of the falling leaves.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 11/9/2023 10:21:00 AM
John, congrats and high fives for your win! Wonderful word usage - "chittering!" I can feel the cold, crisp air! Blessings to you!
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:40:00 AM
Love it. Congratulations. Well deserved win
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Date: 11/8/2023 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations
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Date: 11/8/2023 8:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful October Monoku write. Enjoy your day/win writing away........
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Date: 10/29/2023 6:25:00 AM
This is so serene and beautiful! I love “ chittering of the falling leaves “ brilliant
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Date: 10/29/2023 6:11:00 AM
Wonderful. God bless you. Happy October! Love and prayers, Gina
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