Line Gauthier Poet Rhyme

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October Winds

While october sun the colored leaves will burn
Indian summer days will not return
Howling winds harass a timid nature
While in haste painting a stirring picture
On its throne as judge and jury
The universe unleashed with fury



AP: Honorable Mention 2022

Submitted on October 6, 2019 for OCTOBER CONTEST 45 OR LESS WORDS
sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER  -  RANKED 2ND

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Kim Rodrigues October 24, 2019 at 11:17 AM Gorgeous write! Congratulations, Line! Line Gauthier October 24, 2019 at 2:15 PM Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf October 22, 2019 at 8:57 PM Great October-themed poem for us here in the Windy City when the winds whip in from the North, as they did today. Pen of Truth here! Congrats on your win in the contest, Line! Cheers, Gershon Line Gauthier October 22, 2019 at 9:40 PM Thank you so much, Gershon of the Windy City. I'm not really a big fan of wild gusts of wind myself.

L. J. Carber October 22, 2019 at 10:08 AM Congrats Line, on your win! Line Gauthier October 22, 2019 at 9:40 PM Thanks, LJ Much appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich October 21, 2019 at 7:53 PM great metaphor in your poem, Line. Congrats for your win. Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 7:55 PM Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Janice Canerdy October 21, 2019 at 12:11 PM CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Line. Janice Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 3:31 PM Thanks, Janice. Much appreciated.

Charlie Knowlton October 21, 2019 at 11:37 AM Nice poem Line, and congrats on such a deserving win. Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 3:30 PM Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.

Brenda Chiri October 21, 2019 at 9:26 AM Line beautiful win!;) Line Gauthier October 21, 2019 at 9:30 AM Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.

P.S. Awtry October 7, 2019 at 9:12 AM The winds are something here too! They howl through the eaves of our house and it sounds like Halloween!