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October Winds

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While october sun the colored leaves will burn Indian summer days will not return Howling winds harass a timid nature While in haste painting a stirring picture On its throne as judge and jury The universe unleashed with fury AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted on October 6, 2019 for OCTOBER CONTEST 45 OR LESS WORDS sponsored by CAREN KRUTSINGER - RANKED 2ND

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Date: 10/24/2019 11:17:00 AM
Gorgeous write! Congratulations, Line!
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Date: 10/24/2019 2:15:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/22/2019 8:57:00 PM
Great October-themed poem for us here in the Windy City when the winds whip in from the North, as they did today. Pen of Truth here! Congrats on your win in the contest, Line! Cheers, Gershon
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Date: 10/22/2019 9:40:00 PM
Thank you so much, Gershon of the Windy City. I'm not really a big fan of wild gusts of wind myself.
Date: 10/22/2019 10:08:00 AM
Congrats Line, on your win!
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Date: 10/22/2019 9:40:00 PM
Thanks, LJ Much appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 7:53:00 PM
great metaphor in your poem, Line. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 10/21/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea. Most appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 12:11:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Line. Janice
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Date: 10/21/2019 3:31:00 PM
Thanks, Janice. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 11:37:00 AM
Nice poem Line, and congrats on such a deserving win.
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Date: 10/21/2019 3:30:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/21/2019 9:26:00 AM
Line beautiful win!;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 10/21/2019 9:30:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.
Date: 10/7/2019 9:12:00 AM
The winds are something here too! They howl through the eaves of our house and it sounds like Halloween!
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