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October Transience

OCTOBER TRANSIENCE Bipolar month again unsettled ever changing Summer’s mellow imitation defies winter’s grasp Days of transient golden treasure to be cherished Light and dark competing now in passing equipoise Summer’s mellow imitation defies winter’s grasp Sun now heads for southern apogee on Capricorn Light and dark competing now in passing equipoise Time’s echoed cycle of the seasons shall continue Sun now heads for southern apogee on Capricorn Days of transient golden treasure to be cherished Time’s echoed cycle of the seasons shall continue Bipolar month again unsettled ever changing 16 October 2019 Poet's October Pantoum Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 11/13/2019 9:01:00 AM
Back with congratulations!
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Date: 11/7/2019 7:59:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Poet's October Pantoum, Geoffrey, nicely done. Hugs Eve
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/8/2019 5:33:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 11/7/2019 4:46:00 PM
Congrats Geoffrey
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/8/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thanks, Pixie Dust
Date: 11/7/2019 12:07:00 PM
Your uncanny approach is worthy for your high placement, thank you for entering my contest ~ Aloha always William
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 11/8/2019 5:31:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind comments and for the placement in your contest.
Date: 10/17/2019 8:15:00 AM
Such an intelligent piece! I especially loved that second line—that is October alright! :)
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P.S. AWTRY
Date: 10/17/2019 10:01:00 AM
Always a pleasure to read your fine work. :)
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Geoffrey Brewer
Date: 10/17/2019 8:39:00 AM
Many thanks for your feedback, P.S. and for relieving my comment drought