Paula Goldsmith Poet Rhyme

October Sun Shining Through

October sun shining through the fall leaves,
what beautiful colors you do weave.

I first see red,
looks like the leaf has bled.

Then I see blue,
when I think of you.

Peeking through a leaf is a bright orange,
looks like my morning porridge.

Sun shinning through in glittery gold,
what a beautiful sight to behold.

Date: 10/29/2019

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Ann Foster November 20, 2019 at 10:00 AM Sweet and full of excellent imagery. Well written my friend. I read it twice and then hit the fav. Have the nicest day. Ann Paula Goldsmith November 27, 2019 at 8:00 PM Glad you like it. I love fall. A great time of the year. Have a great day writing..........

Lady Labyrinth November 4, 2019 at 4:40 PM Beautiful. Paula Goldsmith November 4, 2019 at 4:52 PM "Thank You." I also love autumn. I love the cooler weather...... Lady Labyrinth November 4, 2019 at 4:40 PM I love Autumn best.

Sanjay Karmakar October 31, 2019 at 10:36 AM This is pretty well describing the shining October sun with the golden glitters. Wishing the best for ever. With regards. sk. Paula Goldsmith November 1, 2019 at 3:07 PM I love the fall time of the year. Thank You for reading and writing.........

Vijay Pandit October 31, 2019 at 6:34 AM Beautiful scenery shining through your words in October Sun..a lovely sight, indeed, Paula. Paula Goldsmith November 1, 2019 at 3:02 PM October is a beautiful month. With the fall leaves and cooler weather. Thank You for reading and writing.

Andrea Dietrich October 30, 2019 at 9:06 PM this is very pretty, Paula. Thanks for your comment to my poetry. Paula Goldsmith November 1, 2019 at 3:00 PM Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. My comment to you was because you write such beautiful poems.