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October Sun Shining Through

October sun shining through the fall leaves, what beautiful colors you do weave. I first see red, looks like the leaf has bled. Then I see blue, when I think of you. Peeking through a leaf is a bright orange, looks like my morning porridge. Sun shinning through in glittery gold, what a beautiful sight to behold. Date: 10/29/2019

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Date: 11/20/2019 10:00:00 AM
Sweet and full of excellent imagery. Well written my friend. I read it twice and then hit the fav. Have the nicest day. Ann
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/27/2019 8:00:00 PM
Glad you like it. I love fall. A great time of the year. Have a great day writing..........
Date: 11/4/2019 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/4/2019 4:52:00 PM
"Thank You." I also love autumn. I love the cooler weather......
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Lady Labyrinth
Date: 11/4/2019 4:40:00 PM
I love Autumn best.
Date: 10/31/2019 10:36:00 AM
This is pretty well describing the shining October sun with the golden glitters. Wishing the best for ever. With regards. sk.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/1/2019 3:07:00 PM
I love the fall time of the year. Thank You for reading and writing.........
Date: 10/31/2019 6:34:00 AM
Beautiful scenery shining through your words in October Sun..a lovely sight, indeed, Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/1/2019 3:02:00 PM
October is a beautiful month. With the fall leaves and cooler weather. Thank You for reading and writing.
Date: 10/30/2019 9:06:00 PM
this is very pretty, Paula. Thanks for your comment to my poetry.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 11/1/2019 3:00:00 PM
Thank You, for your note. Glad you like it. My comment to you was because you write such beautiful poems.

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