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October Spirit Train

October spirit train has arrived
plowing through the German forest
steam hissing and spitting
terrified oaks and elms genuflect
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Hankins Avatar
March 11, 2022 at 10:03 AM
Excellent example of imagism, Caren. Every word describes the scene.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 12, 2022 at 5:08 AM
Thank you Hank.
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