October Sky - Contest



The October sky
spreads rose petals all over-
for you and I

The autumnal love 
pervades the ambience with
crooning of the cranes

Sudden rain cools off-
the nature is in pink with
chirping of the birds

(c) Anindya Mohan Tagore (Bobby)

25/08/2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 5:26 AM
Will do, if you have a chance come visit, perhaps some of my writes will appeal to you.
Lamoureux Avatar
September 18, 2015 at 7:41 AM
Congratulations, I see this won in the contest. I developed a form called Questionku which is in the forms section on the soup. Look it up and give it a try, I think you would do it well.
Tagore Avatar
September 25, 2015 at 12:04 AM
Hello Richard! Thanks for reading and commenting on my poems... feeling blessed. Trying the form developed by you. Please look up and comment to enhance the level of my humble write. Warm regards, Bobby
Dietrich Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 12:06 AM
this is gorgeous. BIG congratulations.
Tagore Avatar
September 12, 2015 at 7:24 AM
Thank you Andrea... hugs, Bobby
Gasun Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 7:23 AM
I extremely love this beautiful chain of haiku of yours my very dear friend, Bobby. I'm so happy to read it tonight. Congratulations as well on your win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora
Tagore Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 8:08 AM
Thanks a lot Leonora for visiting my page and for loving my humble write... Poems are meant to be enjoyed by the readers and when it happens, the purpose is served...Much love and hugs, Bobby
A  Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 12:05 AM
Anindya Mohan Tagore,,, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT
Tagore Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 7:36 AM
Thanks a lot SKAT, humbled to know that simple words had touched your soul... Warm regards, Bobby
A. Sharma Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 5:01 AM
Wonderful string of haikus Anindya! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!
Tagore Avatar
August 31, 2015 at 9:50 AM
Thanks a lot Dr. Sharma, your nice words encourage me a lot. By the way, in which page I can see the result and other winning entries? If you know please give me the link..... Warm regards, Bobby
Sietesantos Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 9:48 PM
Hi Bobby, I enjoyed reading this beautiful haiku which sings with awesome imagery! Good luck in the contest and a 7! Pandita
Tagore Avatar
August 25, 2015 at 10:42 PM
Hi Pandita, Thanks for your nice comments and enjoying my humble write. Warm regards, Bobby
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