Aiyah Torres Poet Haiku

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October Sky

leaves turned to flowers
                 heaven paints in mandarin
                     nature celebrates.


                      a perfect canvass
            lovers watching autumn's glance
                     birds serenade 'em.

                    
                     feelings so divine
         when sun kissed the mountain tops
                  freedom in His hands.



                 

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Contest: October Sky (three headed haiku)
Sponsor: Skat A
Placed 4th

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Lynn Marie August 9, 2016 at 11:29 PM This is so beautiful, your imagery is powerful, your words deeply inspiring. I love Haiku and this is truly art. blessings, lynn

Poet Destroyer A December 30, 2015 at 10:53 PM Aiyah, I'd never close the year on poetry soup, without saying thank you to all the poets on my favorite list. Wishing you the best this coming year **2016** Happy New Year... Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Len Gasun October 9, 2015 at 7:21 AM My very dear friend, Aiyah, this is a very beautiful haiku for this month. I love it soo much. My belated hearty congratulations on your win! Many hugs! Thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by also to thank you for your very warm, so sweet and lovely greetings on my birthday. Tytysooo much. Sa totoo lang very shy ako but hope to meet you someday. Promise. God bless you my very dear friend. Tytysssm! Many hugs back at you! love lots, Leonora

Skat A October 7, 2015 at 9:03 AM This is lovely --enjoying your wonderful poem again. (soup-mail) SKAT

Kp Nunez September 20, 2015 at 9:12 AM Lovely choka (3-headed haiku) my friend. No wonder this won. Powerful last line, verse 3. Congrats! How've you been?

Paul Callus September 2, 2015 at 11:59 AM Lovely to see this string of haiku on the winners' list, Aiyah:) Congratulations. // paul

Andrea Dietrich September 2, 2015 at 12:33 AM Congratulations, I enjoyed seeing what you wrote for the contest and the great picture to go with your lovely poetry.

Skat A September 2, 2015 at 12:02 AM Aiyah, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Michael Tor August 31, 2015 at 7:23 AM This was one of my favorites. I would put it the very top.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 31, 2015 at 4:52 AM Wonderful string of haikus Aiyah! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Jim Tidd August 26, 2015 at 9:14 AM These are nice.

Eric Boddie August 26, 2015 at 8:37 AM with talent so unique....your pen Beautifully speaks....touching many hearts....with simply dazzling art....;)

Michael Tor August 25, 2015 at 4:41 PM Very nice Aiyah. Truly enjoyed.

Anne-Lise Andresen August 25, 2015 at 1:01 PM - Very pretty autumn image, dear Aiyah !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 25, 2015 at 12:53 PM such a lovely string of haiku good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx