October Sky

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leaves turned to flowers
                 heaven paints in mandarin
                     nature celebrates.


                      a perfect canvass
            lovers watching autumn's glance
                     birds serenade 'em.

                    
                     feelings so divine
         when sun kissed the mountain tops
                  freedom in His hands.



                 

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Contest: October Sky (three headed haiku)
Sponsor: Skat A
Placed 4th

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Lynn Marie

Date: 8/9/2016 11:29:00 PM

This is so beautiful, your imagery is powerful, your words deeply inspiring. I love Haiku and this is truly art. blessings, lynn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2015 10:53:00 PM

Aiyah, I'd never close the year on poetry soup, without saying thank you to all the poets on my favorite list. Wishing you the best this coming year **2016** Happy New Year... Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Len Gasun

Date: 10/9/2015 7:21:00 AM

My very dear friend, Aiyah, this is a very beautiful haiku for this month. I love it soo much. My belated hearty congratulations on your win! Many hugs! Thank you so much for sharing! Stopping by also to thank you for your very warm, so sweet and lovely greetings on my birthday. Tytysooo much. Sa totoo lang very shy ako but hope to meet you someday. Promise. God bless you my very dear friend. Tytysssm! Many hugs back at you! love lots, Leonora