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October Sky

Chameleon clouds
Tempting mesmerizing view 
Pretty in pink shades

Kaleidoscope sky
Striking explosive colors
Majestic image 

Dreamlike remote clouds 
Uniquely asymmetric
Rorschach perceptions

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Skat A

September 2, 2015 at 12:07 AM

Barbara, thank you for the October Sky (three headed haiku) WIN.... SKAT

Barbara Campbell

September 2, 2015 at 4:05 PM

I thank you for selecting my poem. It is very gratifying. Barbara

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

August 31, 2015 at 5:05 AM

Wonderful string of haikus Barbara! Perfect to the pic, Congrats on big win!

Barbara Campbell

August 31, 2015 at 10:51 AM

Dear Upma: When I hear from you I feel happy. I do not communicate with people as much as I would like to. However, your words and thoughts are an ongoing pleasure. TX BC

James Inman

August 30, 2015 at 8:46 AM

Barbara, beautifully written, very visual and excellent imagery. I love the first and last lines. Ever changing colors and images in the clouds. Reminds me of when I used to point out images in the clouds to my daughter. "By the way, Barbara, look at these clouds and tell me what you see." of course you have to imagine it being said with a German accent.

Barbara Campbell

August 30, 2015 at 3:35 PM

James, I read it with the accent in mind. Thanks for your positive comments. Barbara

Constance La France

August 20, 2015 at 8:13 PM

Barbara, so beautifully penned, A7 and best of luck in the contest and thank you for visiting my tattered poem, in answer to your question, I wept each word

Barbara Campbell

August 20, 2015 at 8:33 PM

I have a picture in my mind of you as a sweet little girl in the church and of the walk with your father. By the way, where does the A7 come from? I've been meaning to ask, but did not until now. I appreciate your words regarding the poem. Thanks!! Barbara