Notes About The Poem
For: Bite Size Contest no125 Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
October 04, 2025

October Sky

October sky bleeds blue
like tears dripping from fleeing clouds,
or perhaps it's only an echo of sorrow 
escaping the confine of my soul
to become the blue sky of October,
or to simply become.
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 5:20 PM
outstanding contest entry, Chetta! 'tears dripping from fleeing clouds' was a spot on image...I especially liked the last line.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 4, 2025 at 1:14 PM
Your "October Sky" is a wonderful write. I love this fun month. Have a Blessed weekend writing away.........
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