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October Rain

I remember the tears with yesterdays pain that dreadful year of October rain Darkened skies with clouds of grey gloom which followed everyday Hidden in shadows fate lurked at me a game of life which took three With each breeze of passing wind fate just laughed at me again Cold wet rain stained my face salty tears I could taste As I looked up to the sky I could not help but wonder why My soul screamed with terror and pain that dreadful year of October rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




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Date: 7/23/2008 3:27:00 PM
Hello Rene A very indepth write that makes one heart feel the longing, the pain. Very well written indeed. Congrats on your amazing poetry being featured this week! Hope you are doing well. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 7/22/2008 6:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week Rene'. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:13:00 AM
Rhyme and flow were perfect and the message profound - congrats on being featured
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Date: 7/21/2008 11:00:00 AM
Very beautiful and very sad - congrats on the feature
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Date: 7/21/2008 8:18:00 AM
congratulations Rene' on the featuring of "October Rain." Vince
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Date: 7/21/2008 7:46:00 AM
nice write, some of the best poems are wrote while a heart bleeds,keep on writing on.
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Date: 7/20/2008 5:40:00 PM
Your poetry haunts me dear friend. Hoping you are well. Congratulations on your well deserved featured write of the week. Love, Shar
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