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October Offered Other

Oh,
Onward
October	
Orchestra ode,
Offering tree leafs
Of oval and other.
Orange, red, onslaught color
Optimize falls’ ooh-aah skin tease
To tantalize seasons sassy change ~
Our tingle, tickle, breezy couple time.

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Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 10/8/2015 12:17:00 AM

Makes me want to dance.Light and lovely Congratulations CayCay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2015 6:02:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 10:42:00 PM

CayCay, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

Dan Cwiak

Date: 10/1/2015 10:27:00 AM

Wonderful way to bring in the tickling delights of October's change. Nice win!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/1/2015 10:33:00 AM

OK, Yes - thank you, Dan - I'm sorry - I have the giggles about this one. I do appreciate you, you know that ... CayCay

Michael Tor

Date: 10/1/2015 3:05:00 AM

CayCay nice win!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/1/2015 10:31:00 AM

Oh, Michael - I have to laugh because I was in umpteen-millioneth-place. Still, I thank you and I'm laughing ... CayCay

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 2:32:00 AM

I liked the flirtiness in this one! Congrats in my contest.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/1/2015 10:30:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea for taking the time to write everyone - that is so kind ... CayCay

Julia Ward

Date: 9/26/2015 8:46:00 AM

A happy, light-hearted poem.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 10/1/2015 12:53:00 AM

Thank you, Julia - I appreciate your comment ... CayCay

Miraj Raha

Date: 9/25/2015 12:42:00 PM

you have really "O"wed away to glory here,all for the love of "O"ctober eh.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2015 7:35:00 PM

O - what can I say? Another fun thing to do with my pen ... CayCay

Dan Cwiak

Date: 9/25/2015 4:11:00 AM

Beautiful imagery in this work. The autumnal equinox is upon us...timed this one just right!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/25/2015 12:27:00 PM

Thank you, Dan. It was the challenge of an etheree that grabbed my pen. I think you'd enjoy creating a contribution to the contest ... CayCay

Cherl Dunn

Date: 9/24/2015 8:40:00 PM

CayCay Love the part about Orchestra ode, great visual image, love also the last line, a very inspirational write here my friend, just enjoyed it alot, glad I stopped by tonight, thanks for the cool comments, and no I don't mind if you point out typos my daughter does the same thing, lol so it doesn't bother me at all cheri

Paul Callus

Date: 9/23/2015 3:04:00 PM

Truly enjoyed this Etheree, CayCay. It is spritely, twirling and swirling along in a happy mood. I like your warm-colourd tree leaves which are a main characteristic of autumn's October. #7 // paul

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/24/2015 10:45:00 AM

Hi, Paul - your comment is beautiful prose and I am grateful that it is directed to me. I am so glad the words brought you joy ... CayCay

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/23/2015 4:59:00 AM

strong contender here; i really like the alliteration of 'o', very inventive, and refreshingly lighthearted and upbeat, as there have been a lot of serious ones - good luck! :)

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/23/2015 10:34:00 AM

Thank you, Charlotte, for your kind and encouraging words. I appreciate you taking the time to comment ... CayCay

Kp Nunez

Date: 9/22/2015 11:42:00 PM

Ohhsome...:-) This one made me smile, Cay. A lighthearted etheree. Makes me want to try myself... Lovely imagery. 7 hugs!

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/23/2015 10:33:00 AM

Hey, Kim - I'll have to click on over and see if you composed an etheree. It delights me that I made you smile and I thank you for telling me so ... CayCay

Mark Woods

Date: 9/22/2015 6:13:00 PM

Ohh lovely, so peaceful and enchanting...

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/22/2015 8:23:00 PM

O, indeed - what fun I had. I'm glad you enjoyed it, Mark ... CayCay

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/22/2015 6:07:00 PM

Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading this one today..Well written..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

CayCay Jennings
Date: 9/22/2015 8:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sara. I believe I commented on several of your good poems today. I've made a mental note to read more, but don't get excited, my mental notes don't always work out. I do try ... CayCay