October Morning

As I gaze out the upstairs window
Looking at a scene from yesterday
This place from my childhood
This place of cherished memories
It is early, and a burst of sun gleams proudly
As it began it's rise over the distant horizon
A string of washing waving on the line
Looking like colorful flags flapping in the wind
And the doves strutting on the cobbled path
Cooing their song, or perhaps complaining 
About the chill of the October morn.
Perhaps it is not quite the same now,
As it was on a long ago October morn
Yet, something of those days hang on
The washing no longer blowing in a breeze
The doves have found a home beyond
My grandmother has long been gone
But there still prevails a peaceful song.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
October 10, 2008 at 12:43 PM
My Granmother lived in an old farmhouse witha dirt cellar. I loved that place. Thanks for the memories and a few nostalgic teardrops. Vince
Strand Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 6:47 AM
Evocativ poetry Carrie.Keep 'em coming.rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments
Reynolds Avatar
October 9, 2008 at 3:32 AM
Ahhh, and mine in mine. Beautiful images and love pours throughout this write, lovely Carrie. Love Kristin
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