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October Moon, Sun and Sky

To a Mother of Pearl Moon, brilliant disc at twilight And peeking through satin clouds at dusk Taking the place of setting burnt-orange Sun perfection The giver of life replaced by the finder of love. And peeking through satin clouds at dusk Bright twinkling stars in a velvety sky The giver of life replaced by the finder of love Long black eyelashes blink through a Sea of blue eyes. Bright twinkling stars in a velvety sky Taking the place of setting burnt-orange Sun perfection Long black eyelashes blink through a Sea of blue eyes To a Mother of Pearl Moon, brilliant disc at twilight. 2019 October 30 Poet's Pantoum Cash Prize Poetry Contest Sponsored by: William Kekaula

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Date: 1/8/2025 10:21:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed New Year.
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Date: 10/30/2019 7:13:00 AM
Very good pantoum..
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Farrah Veronica Sinha
Date: 10/30/2019 8:37:00 AM
Thank you dear Silent One xoxo

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