Lucilla Carrillo Poet Lyric

October Moon

October moon, October moon, as you
come out tonight, please shine on me 
your light. Let some guitars play a tune
to serenade my love this night.

October moon - you are beautiful.
Especially on this night. Surrounded
by stars, you are the Queen and the
stars form your crown, october moon,
October moon.

As the wind blows a cool breeze, I want 
to be in my lover's arms, on this night 
October moon, October moon... 

10/11/2012
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Matthew Anish October 27, 2012 at 9:09 AM Nice poem! My late father used to qoute Thomas Wolfe to me "The scurrying of the leaves in old October". Peace and love Matthew Anish

Poet Destroyer A October 16, 2012 at 2:17 PM Hello Lucilla, October is my favorite month. I love the joy you seek through its beams.... always..pd

Andrea Dietrich October 13, 2012 at 1:26 AM I love the lilting lyrical sound of this, October is queen of the fall.

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2012 at 4:43 PM Enjoyed reading this romantic creation...I hope that the lover's arms under the moon rings true for you..Sara

Rachel St.Cross October 12, 2012 at 1:37 PM ‡ These Lovely Words Could Become Lyrics Within An Enchanting Love Song. I Do Love The Moon And October Beginning The Festive Holiday Season, Beautiful Lucilla. You Know I Have Noticed A Bright Shining Star Thousands Of Miles Above Five Other Smaller Stars Forming A 'V' Amid The Night Sky ? The Moon Could Be As A Scoop Of Ice Cream Within Their Comb, Haha. Very Beautiful, And Thank You For Your Kind Visit. Love, Rachel ‡

Joy Wellington October 12, 2012 at 9:48 AM Love is in the air!! A real beauty of a poem Lucilla, light and flirty. I will be happy to have you enter my next contest, please feel free to do so. One love. Joy Wells

Harry Horsman October 12, 2012 at 8:45 AM wow this is is so relaxing Lucilla, so smooth, an injection of sincerity, you are indeed a gem....

Anne-Lise Andresen October 11, 2012 at 2:20 PM We have really October moon tonight Lucilla - Star clear and moonlight (no rain - no wind) A really lovely October evening / night, so that your lovely poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise: Anne-Lise Andresen October 11, 2012 at 2:21 PM I have responded to your S-Mail. :)