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October Moon

Full moon now that Fall has come Expectations of Shorter days as one Leaves falling Flowers hiding Hibernation begins Plants abiding October Moon Lights the night Chills in the air Geese in flight Awaiting the frost And frozen dirt Creatures are seeking The silence of Earth

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 10/24/2023 4:45:00 PM

Kelli, your poem "October Moon" is a beautiful and evocative piece of writing. It captures the essence of the autumn season in a way that is both melancholic and hopeful. I particularly like the way you use language and imagery to create a vivid and immersive experience for the reader. From the "expectations of shorter days" and "leaves falling" to the "hibernation begins" and "plants abiding," your poem is full of rich and evocative language.

Kelli White
Date: 10/28/2023 4:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, Kelli

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/24/2023 2:55:00 PM

Well encapsulated.

Kelli White
Date: 10/28/2023 4:03:00 PM

Thank you very much, RL, Kelli