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October Moon

Twisting and tangling, in this lovers web clawing and crying to be-- set free the bait was placed in front of you, I watched you fall in, so easily Shadows cascading around the October Moon, a predator with its prey in the seduction of this web, watching you wiggle to get away I curl and tie you up even more, - under these shimmering stars above close your eyes and I'll have my way, in this tight web of love Under the silhouette of, the October Moon a predator with its prey, such a succulent sight - turning, colliding and sighing with you as I have my way, under the October Moon tonight _________________ ~ Something playful, dark and naughty ~ The Magic of the Moon and its Magnetic glow

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John Gondolf

Date: 5/2/2022 5:04:00 PM

You are quite the seductress my sweet friend…this poem is pure delight. Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/2/2022 6:08:00 PM

Your thoughts leaves me breathless. I enjoyed writing about the October Moon in this way. Thank you John, for your lovely comment. :) Hugs, Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 11/1/2021 8:54:00 AM

This is even better as I go back and re-visit this scribble, Brandy, I am captivated by your playfulness and naughtiness. ;) Hugs, John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 11/1/2021 5:07:00 PM

It's been a while since I have visited this scribble. It is *very* exciting and inviting, somewhat dark, yet, not in a bad way. Blushing... Thank you John, for reading this again and leaving your thoughts. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 12/16/2020 5:51:00 AM

So beautiful! I was born in October.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 12/16/2020 9:43:00 AM

Thank you, Kim. My birthday is October 1st. I appreciate you and your kind words. :) Brandy

Keith O.J. Hunt

Date: 1/13/2020 11:31:00 AM

A wondrous sylph you are with your words....well written and pleasantly wistful;-)

Brandy Nicole
Date: 1/13/2020 3:59:00 PM

Thank you Keith. I posted this playful, yet somewhat naughty poem on my birthday. The mood lingers indeed. I appreciate your thoughts. :) Brandy

Joseph May

Date: 5/5/2019 7:58:00 PM

A lovers web of no escape...Beautiful write Brandy..

Brandy Nicole
Date: 5/5/2019 10:29:00 PM

This is very playful and sensual. Thank you Joseph. So kind of you to stop by and read this little scribble of mine. I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Caycay Jennings

Date: 10/28/2018 4:38:00 PM

I was thoroughly and completely grabbed in a wonderful way. Loved every 2nd of it. An outstanding WOWer poem. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/28/2018 8:27:00 PM

:) Thank you CayCay. I think that is what happened to me, these words just wrapped around me and wouldn't let go. That's okay- a lot of tangling in a lovers web is very exciting indeed. Your thoughts are appreciated. ~ Brandy

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 10/14/2018 6:17:00 AM

Wickedly seductive piece, this, very alluring. Nice write.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/14/2018 2:12:00 PM

Thank you Lawrence. I must say, I truly enjoyed writing this. :) Brandy

Charlie Way

Date: 10/5/2018 9:59:00 AM

Love Web, what an imagery!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/5/2018 6:17:00 PM

:) Thank you Charlie. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy

Pashang Salehi

Date: 10/4/2018 2:58:00 AM

Beautiful imagery... I enjoyed reading this piece

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/4/2018 9:08:00 AM

Thank you Pashang. I appreciate you stopping by to read this little scribble. ~ Brandy

Arturo Michael

Date: 10/3/2018 5:30:00 AM

That's the way...I like it....full of passion....in a web of love...All the best Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/3/2018 10:34:00 AM

:) Thank you Arturo. Your thoughts bring a smile and a soft giggle. I appreciate you and your kind words. My best to you. ~ Brandy

Winged Warrior

Date: 10/2/2018 12:44:00 PM

You're such a naughty Moon-tober...I'll bring the Moon-Shine near the Moon-River lol...dancing in Moon-Light, so right...may your beautiful poetry last many moons...love & the magnetic moon...^WW^

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/2/2018 9:50:00 PM

Is that so?? Well, you know-- there is something nice about being naughty. Lol. Playfully so. :) You are so sweet. Thank you my Warrior with Wings. Better watch out, the glow of the moon is very tempting. You may become drawn to its light. :) Moon and Moments. ~ Brandy

Tim Smith

Date: 10/2/2018 12:01:00 PM

Exquisite, I'd be trapped by the moon any time

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/2/2018 9:32:00 PM

Thank you Tim. :) Your thoughts bring a smile. ~ Brandy

Lyric Man

Date: 10/2/2018 7:42:00 AM

Beware the black widow.. her sexy silk is much more than just a beautiful web. She draws you in and you succumb, longing to be close.. she winks her approval as you approach for you are her meal! Brandy, your alluring words are prophetic.. and October is upon us. Such a masterful write!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/2/2018 11:20:00 AM

Yes, the Black Widow certainly will devour her prey- in a powerful way. Perhaps, in this poem of passion, she is having her way, with her prey- and he has given her permission to do so. :) The sensual touch of love, it is exciting indeed. Thank you Lyric Man. You and your thoughts are always appreciated. ~ Brandy

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/1/2018 2:22:00 PM

Definitely playful..I enjoyed reading this brilliant depiction..each stanza progressively pulls the reader in ..seductive depitction ..you concluded it cleverly, Brandy.

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 7:27:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Yes, it is the seduction of love, and moments of sweet passion. It is always a joy to read your thoughts. I appreciate you. ~ Brandy

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/1/2018 1:37:00 PM

ohh, a beautiful poem that ignites the senses; very tempting!... much enjoyed, brandy...huggs

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 7:19:00 PM

Exactly. Love and temptation have ignited all the senses. Thank you nette for your kind words. Your thoughts are appreciated. :) Brandy

John Gondolf

Date: 10/1/2018 11:28:00 AM

I was always kind of a nature person myself. Very sensual my friend. John

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 7:13:00 PM

Well- Nature and Love seem to Collide, in this playful poem of mine. Thank you John for your wonderful comment. :) Brandy

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/1/2018 10:34:00 AM

Sometimes predatory but with purpose, you and your love under the October moon! Nice one, Brandy!

Brandy Nicole
Date: 10/1/2018 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Kim. Being this close to love, certainly makes for some exciting moments indeed. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy