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October Kiss Mother Nature’s Art Gallery Exhibit Blue October skies, fall and autumn days Gaze and jump into the maze of crescendo colours Flickering in a blaze show of filigreed leaves, Mother Nature’s art gallery exhibit Blends of orange, green, and red watercolor tapestries of bedding plants, emerald green grass Nature’s light guarded secret as we watch in wonder Of cool nights, rainy, and sunny filled days As whispering breeze kiss raises a gentle flight Bringing shedding leaves down onto the ground cover 10/1/2016

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Date: 10/25/2016 6:42:00 PM
Hello Eve, A most beautiful posted image with Mother Nature's art -- and the perfect blend of imagery and words to form the vision of an "October Kiss" in the reader's mind. I really enjoyed this one!! A Big Seven too!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 10/25/2016 9:38:00 AM
Very descriptive, I can see it.
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Date: 10/5/2016 2:17:00 AM
Great. I love this, Kai
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Date: 10/3/2016 6:31:00 AM
You never stop surprising. Quite old style but beautiful as always. Best regards David
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Date: 10/2/2016 11:07:00 AM
- A lovely October kiss, Eve - A 7 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2016 10:19:00 AM
Painting masterpieces with words dear, Eve! Loved it and a seven!
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Date: 10/2/2016 4:57:00 AM
what an incredible line - Mother nature's art exhibit - absolutely perfect to go with the stunning picture and amazing imagery in your poem:-) a 7 and fave:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/2/2016 1:22:00 AM
So many colors and still unable to suffuse the darkness in our soul.
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Date: 10/1/2016 11:47:00 PM
Eve, this is beautifully written with vivid images of Autumn. I enjoyed reading it. Love, Kim
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Eve Roper
Date: 10/2/2016 12:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Kim:-) Hugs Eve

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