October Half Time

old trees remember
confusion stirs the leaves
an idle rake waits
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Sambourne Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 9:49 PM
A superb Haiku, John. I especially like the contrast between restless nature and an idle rake. Congratulations! Brian
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2023 at 10:05 AM
Excellent entry, John. Congrats
Greenhough Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 6:58 PM
Inanimate things suddenly come alive. I love how feelings are woven into the poem
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 11:45 AM
I read this a few times because I enjoy the images and especially the idea of trees remembering. Great poem.
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