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October Half Time

old trees remember confusion stirs the leaves an idle rake waits

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 10/28/2023 9:49:00 PM
A superb Haiku, John. I especially like the contrast between restless nature and an idle rake. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 10/28/2023 10:05:00 AM
Excellent entry, John. Congrats
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Date: 10/16/2023 6:58:00 PM
Inanimate things suddenly come alive. I love how feelings are woven into the poem
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Date: 10/16/2023 2:32:00 PM
a lovely Senyru that captures mid-October...great title. Well done, sir. Enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 10/16/2023 11:49:00 AM
I wish I'd written this - all my communing with trees and they whispered nothing to me - well jel
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Date: 10/16/2023 11:45:00 AM
I read this a few times because I enjoy the images and especially the idea of trees remembering. Great poem.
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