Len Gasun Poet Pantoum

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October Golden Chain

Percussion plays once in a while beyond its curtain
In duo with the flash of paparazzi’s capturing film
Prelude to an exhilaration of blissful days’ chain
Where rain and sunshine smack on a rainbow beam

In duo with the flash of paparazzi’s capturing film
Buoying up the breeze as it dances and toasts its grace
When rain and sunshine smack on a rainbow beam
Blissful days of October, in wide open arms…embrace

Buoying up the breeze as it dances, toasts its grace
Petal-litters bounce and float on air in tranquil glade
Blissful days of October, in wide open arms…embrace
As green grasses bud out from densely colored bed

Petal-litters bounce and float on air in tranquil glade
Prelude to an exhilaration of blissful days’ chain
As green grass buds out from densely colored bed
Percussion plays once in a while beyond its curtain

October 6, 2016    11.50pm
©2016Leonora Galinta
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I wrote this poem to greet you all lovingly a Very Happy and Blessed October! 

 Also, a very Happy Birthday to the October Celebrants especially to our dearest poetess and friend (my dearest poetic Sis-BFF), Miss PD /LINDA, whose birthday is TODAY October 7 together with our dearest friend/ poetess, Miss Debbie Duncan (Oct. 7), also Mr. Frank and Mr. Kash, they’re  Oct. 7 also I think, and for other Libran-Scorpions Celebrants: Sis-libramate Sandy Ivy (Oct 5 like me, i miss u), my other poetic friends Mandy T, Suz D, Sandra A, Dr. Ram, Carol E, Sandra A, Caycay and others.  Happy, Happy Birthday! Wishing you the BEST in life especially Good Health, Happiness and Success. Biggest and warmest birthday hugs from me!
May God bless you all! 


This humble composition was also inspired by the form (not for the contest ) and the highlights of the month below:
Autumn Season  (although there are unexpected rainfalls/thunderstorms here in T) ,Holy Rosary Month, Vegetarian Festival (in my place) , Halloween and LIBRANS-SORPIONS  BIRTHDAY MONTH.

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Debbie Duncan April 23, 2017 at 1:27 AM Loved the poem. The October caught my eye :) Then I saw below it was for Oct. birthdays I did remember yours was a couple days before mine. Libra boys, Bruno Mars, Jeff Goldblum, Bruce Springsteen, Gwyneth Paltrow, Kim K. Naomi Watts, Kate Winslet :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 14, 2016 at 11:10 AM This pattern is beautiful Leonora! This format of poetry seems quite challenging, but you weaved your words and line so perfectly, it's a 7 and a FAV for me -Great Job! MC Len Gasun October 16, 2016 at 5:58 AM Thank you so much for your very uplifting comment, the 7 and fave my dear friend MC. So kind of you. Hugs. I honestly admit, this form was quite hard and this was my second attempt 'coz I failed at first. Hope I can do again next time. TYTYSM!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty October 11, 2016 at 12:35 PM O Blessed October. But here in India there is still the touch of eroding summer. It is so disturbing. Enjoy yourself.. Len Gasun October 16, 2016 at 5:52 AM Thank you my dear friend, Rajat. Your wonderful visit is so much appreciated. God bless! Hugs!

Scott Thirtyseven October 10, 2016 at 7:57 AM Love that "...rainbow..." line. It's one of many great images you have captured in this piece. Nicely penned. Chok Dee Khrap Len Gasun October 16, 2016 at 5:49 AM Sawatdikha! Khapkoun kha...Chok dee khrap duai na kha..

Andrea Dietrich October 8, 2016 at 7:24 PM wow, Leonora this is just bursting with imagery. And it looks to me like you patterned it just fine!! Yes, my kitties pantoum is long. It's TOO long and I still did not give all the details I wanted to give for that story! I should have done one like yours , with beautiful imagery. Anyway, they are quite time consuming to do, don't you think? You have to be so careful to see that the lines match up on the next stanza's new lines!! Len Gasun October 9, 2016 at 3:13 AM Thank you so much for dropping by and your feedback my dear friend, Andrea. So much appreciated. This form was really confusing but I think you did a great job on that very long one, kitties. Thank you, I'll take your advice my dear friend. Hugs and smiles:) I'll be back soon.

Paul Callus October 8, 2016 at 1:50 PM What a beautiful poem you have weaved here, Leonora! It feels so blissful and graceful! Yes, there is so much to celebrate in October! Glad that you sound happy and in high spirits. So kind of you to remember the birthdays of fellow Soupers. I hope that you had a truly lovely and blessed birthday:) Big hugs to you. Regards // paul Len Gasun October 9, 2016 at 3:27 AM I'll be back after a short break (a trip) and visit you again with others here. Hugs again! Len Gasun October 9, 2016 at 3:21 AM Thank you so much my dear friend, Paul. I appreciate so much your encouraging comments, loving visit etc. I've many libran friends here inside and outside PS and also in my family circle (4 of them, Im the 5th) and it's unbelievable that we'd sharp memory remembering each other's birthday:)) Again thank you, thank you so much for your lovely greetings and wishes! Bigger hugs back to you from me! So far, my birthday went fine. Blessings! '

Nette Onclaud October 7, 2016 at 11:21 AM lory!..miss you and tried to call but don't know if i still have the right number... such a warm, lovely tribute for all october celebrants... again,,happy birthday with my huggs.. love love! Len Gasun October 8, 2016 at 1:37 PM Thank you so much for stopping by my dear friend, Nette! I'm still using the same number. I will appreciate it so much if you can call me one time. Thank you so much again for your loving greetings and wishes. Hugs. Miss you, too.

Alexis Y. October 7, 2016 at 8:07 AM Hi Leonora, This is a beautiful poem for the month of October. It is so descriptive and the imagery is beautiful. It is also a beautiful tribute piece for all of our poetic friends who celebrate a Birthday this month. Happy Birthday to you all , may all of your wishes come true:-) Alexis Len Gasun October 7, 2016 at 8:54 AM Thank you so much again my dear friend, Alexis. Hugs!

Poet Destroyer A October 7, 2016 at 5:43 AM A beautiful place to be, RIGHT HERE....ON THIS POEM... LEO, for a second, I was feeling sad, birthday blues... but, I've been woken by all who love me consider me a part of their lives. About your poem, the title is perfect, every line is perfect. My favorite line on here "float on air in tranquil glide" <----- that's how I want to ride today. Anyways, I'm blessed to be loved everyday. Good luck Libra Friend and Happy Birthday to all especially those we missed to mention. Linda Len Gasun October 7, 2016 at 7:31 AM Oh, thank you so much for coming my dearest sis-bff. No birthday blues, please....hugs, hugs, hugs...you are truly blessed everyday and you'll be blessed more my loving sis, coz you're a great blessings to me, to your family and to each and everyone. I was calling you this morning but you were out, your daughter had answered the phone. Happy happy birthday again. Hugs and kisses.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 7, 2016 at 3:11 AM - Leonora, a beautiful poem - Sounds like a month with much pleasure :) - Hope you had a lovely birthday - Enjoying October .... it's your month !! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :) Len Gasun October 7, 2016 at 7:23 AM Thank you, thank you so much again my dearest friend, Anne Lise. Hugs!