October Eve

Pressed loudly underfoot
dead leaves fracturing
scattering beneath me.

Warm fragmentary vapor
slated breath steaming
evaporating before me.

Incurious quiet somber
nearly naked trees
standing beyond me.

Advancing dread dusk
day skies sepulcher
entombing above me.

Forlorn and unforgiving
October day ceasing
enveloping me frigidly.


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Alemrany Avatar
December 24, 2020 at 6:44 PM
A good write and well- penned. Extended metaphors convey the state of deep sadness as well as seeking for transparency.
Levasseur Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 2:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I appreciate you reading my poetry sir.
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