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October Eve

Pressed loudly underfoot dead leaves fracturing scattering beneath me. Warm fragmentary vapor slated breath steaming evaporating before me. Incurious quiet somber nearly naked trees standing beyond me. Advancing dread dusk day skies sepulcher entombing above me. Forlorn and unforgiving October day ceasing enveloping me frigidly. (click the pic for a preview of my upcoming book!)

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Date: 12/24/2020 6:44:00 PM
A good write and well- penned. Extended metaphors convey the state of deep sadness as well as seeking for transparency.
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Rob Levasseur
Date: 12/25/2020 2:00:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind comments. I appreciate you reading my poetry sir.

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