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October Etheree

Leaves, Fallen, Autumn’s hues, Spread on the ground, Bright carpets of leaves, Autumn’s colours delight, Glow in soft autumnal light, Making such a beautiful sight, Catch it quick while October is here, As November brings winter ever near. poem written 30th September 2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/3/2015 6:26:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work..Way to go!!! Etherees are delightful..Sara

Skat A

Date: 10/2/2015 10:40:00 PM

Nathan, congratulations on your awesome Etheree win. <3 SKAT

Nathan Bach
Date: 10/3/2015 1:42:00 AM

Thanks but I think I was 9th. I'd love to read the other poems that entered. How can I do that? Nath:-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/1/2015 2:28:00 AM

Sweet one for the season Nathan! Congrats in my contest.

Nathan Bach
Date: 10/1/2015 4:48:00 AM

Thanks very much. I didn't think the contest deadline was up yet. Hopefully I'll do better in another poetry contest. This was only the first time I've heard of this type of poem and I've plenty of time to practice because I'm 10 years old. Nath:-)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 9/30/2015 10:24:00 PM

Pretty and sweet and so sweetly pretty. I really enjoyed your write ... CayCay

Eve Roper

Date: 9/30/2015 9:25:00 AM

Love your beautiful verse, Nathan, the image and the flow. Hugs Eve

Nathan Bach
Date: 9/30/2015 12:04:00 PM

Thank Eve, you've made my day! It's the first time I've ever heard of this type of poetry. I might use it at school when I write my next poem:-) Nath age 10