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October Cool

Crisp lemon colored leaves kamikaze off branches Diving and dying Glorious unconcerned dance Squirrels chatter Scold each other over nuts flip their curly tails with sassy attitudes Deer walk softly, fearing November, understanding Many will be laying down their lives in November Their hoofs smash multi-colored leaves into the forest floor. October cool. Sweaters and sweatshirts precede scarves and mittens Songbirds sing their joy as trees go bare. Announcing winter early

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Date: 10/5/2019 3:55:00 PM
Good Fall song Caren. I feel the cool.
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/6/2019 3:54:00 AM
I am so glad we finally have cool air in Kansas. So so glad!
Date: 10/4/2019 11:13:00 AM
This is great! I love the crisp lemon colored leaves. Well done Caren :)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 10/6/2019 3:54:00 AM
Thank you Heidi. I know you can see them.

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