October Cool

Crisp lemon colored leaves
kamikaze off branches
Diving and dying
Glorious unconcerned dance

Squirrels chatter
Scold each other over nuts
flip their curly tails
with sassy attitudes

Deer walk softly,
fearing November, understanding
Many will be laying down their lives in November
Their hoofs smash multi-colored leaves into the forest floor.

October cool.
Sweaters and sweatshirts precede scarves and mittens
Songbirds sing their joy as trees go bare.
Announcing winter early
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
October 5, 2019 at 3:55 PM
Good Fall song Caren. I feel the cool.
Krutsinger Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 3:54 AM
I am so glad we finally have cool air in Kansas. So so glad!
Sands Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 11:13 AM
This is great! I love the crisp lemon colored leaves. Well done Caren :)
Krutsinger Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 3:54 AM
Thank you Heidi. I know you can see them.
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