Home » Poems » Len Gasun » October Bliss

Len Gasun | + Follow Poet |

October Bliss

Poet's Notes

(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Len Gasun.

I ride freely in respite with what this blissful month serves Like truant in yoga, forgetting all wonga and being wonk That I may enjoy a long break before November morn 10/11/14 7.58am --my very first sijo poem Syllables: 14/16/14 Ninth Place Contest: October Bliss or November Dreams/Sijo or Sedoka Judged: 10/5/14 Sponsor: Poetess Andrea Dietrich *wonga-means money *wonk- also means someone who works and studies hard

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Debbie Duncan

Date: 8/10/2015 11:00:00 PM

The words read right along with your picture.

Len Gasun
Date: 8/11/2015 8:17:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear friend, Debbie! Many hugs!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 10/23/2014 8:56:00 AM

October bliss is a song...wonkwonga wonkwonga wonkwonga Very very interesting Leonora Love---rajat

Len Gasun
Date: 11/5/2014 6:52:00 AM

:)))) You made me smile my dear friend Rajat! I am singing with you. Thank you so much again for your precious time stopping by on my poem. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/22/2014 12:19:00 PM

You did well and your first Sijo poem. Not a form i have tried. It is a warm October for us so far. We were doing a lot of outside yard work this year. We built a roof over the deck we built last year and that has kept us busy this summer. I guess not me but hubby was kept busy. I was the go-for lady. lol love phyl

Len Gasun
Date: 10/22/2014 10:49:00 PM

Thanks a lot for the compliment my dear friend Phyllis and I am so happy & grateful for your stopping by. So glad to hear from you. Mind me,I'm trying to enjoy my vacation with many groups of friends on scheduled appointments in different days, lol. However, back to school tom. The weather is shifting here, cloudy, rainy and sunny and so humid most of the time. TYSM again. Big hugs!

The Situation

Date: 10/16/2014 6:34:00 PM

it's starting to get cold don't mention November.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/20/2014 8:22:00 PM

:)) ah ok. though it's humid here. Thank you my dear friend TS for your precious moment stopping by. Hugs.

John Loving Iii

Date: 10/15/2014 5:31:00 PM

I never let poetry wonk me.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/20/2014 8:21:00 PM

:) So do I, I think my dear friend John. :)) I just love writing. Thank you for your precious moment stopping by on my page. Hugs.

Joseph May

Date: 10/13/2014 8:12:00 AM

Wonderful write and win Leonora....Congrats

Len Gasun
Date: 10/20/2014 8:20:00 PM

Thank you for your precious time stopping by my dear friend Joseph May and for your congratulatory comments and nice feedback on my experimental poem. Hugs!

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 7:09:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this beautiful and unique write.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 2:13:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Maurice! Congratulations for the many wins too. I'm so glad our dear friend Andrea has approved my experimental sijo poem. I could not think of other means on how Oct. be a blissful month for me aside from my b-day and semestral vacation which will begin too soon. Big hugs!

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 10/12/2014 5:43:00 PM

Congrats ,great friend for this wonderful piece...Lovely write...

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 2:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for appreciating my experimental poem my dear friend O.A. and the congrats comment! Big hugs!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 9:31:00 AM

Congrats on ur awesome winning wonderful sijo Leonora! Love the pic!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 2:08:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Upma. Congrats on your many wins too! Big hugs!

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 7:30:00 AM

I like the feelings you manage to transmit with words, Leonora! .. they go perfectly with the picture above. Congrats on your win. // paul

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 2:07:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Paul! Many congrats on your many wins too! Big hugs!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:47:00 AM

the picture compliments the poem so well - many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 2:06:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Jan! Many congrats on your many wins too. Biggest hugs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 5:37:00 AM

Lovely write on October bliss, Leo, congrats

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:59:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dr. Ram. This is just a try of sijo poem and I am so glad our dear friend Andrea has approved it.

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/12/2014 4:46:00 AM

blissful, carefree thoughts. congrats Leonora. Mohan

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:58:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Mohan. This is a try of sijo form. I'm glad our dear friend Andrea approved it. Big hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 1:02:00 AM

oh now I can see the picture with this one, Leonora. I enjoyed the idea of this one, and how you are feeling bliss from school. gosh, you made me have to go look up the word Wonk. It is so different from what I expected! Congrats on my winners list, sweetie. Your book is in the mail as of Friday and they said about ten days!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:56:00 AM

:) Yes, I will be feeling bliss this Oct. from school as soon as my term/sem-break begins next week my very dear friend. The word wonk has 3 meanings but I used the other one. I already wrote the meaning above just below my poem. Oh, thank you so much my win again & in advance for your book. So excited! Biggest hugs!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 1:02:00 AM

I meant bliss from being AWAY from school!!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:47:00 AM

Yeah, you're right my dear friend Andrea!LOL. I cannot think more of other things making October a blissful month here aside from my birthday and term-break at school. :)) But, i'm still in school right now. The kids are not around. I didn't join them in Hongkong for English Camp. My one week break will start next week;) THANK U SO MUCH FOR MY WIN. I DIDN'T EXPECT IT. TYTY!

Joseph May

Date: 10/11/2014 8:02:00 PM

Beautiful Sijo Leonora.....thanks so much for my placement in your contest....best wishes

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:36:00 AM

Thank you so much as well for supporting my contest and your precious time stopping by here leaving me a nice a comment. Big hugs to you my dear friend Joseph May!

Constance La France

Date: 10/11/2014 12:34:00 PM

Leonara, I love this sijo and I really like the photo also and thank you so much for my wonderful placement in your rainy days contest, I am so very honoured ~~

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:32:00 AM

Thank you so much as well for your support and your precious time stopping by my dear friend, Broken Wings. Big hugs!

Tim Smith

Date: 10/11/2014 12:02:00 PM

Bask in the sun..it is a stunning picture....forget your worries..hugs Tim

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:31:00 AM

I will try this so soon my dear friend Tim. I'm in school right now. :))) Thank you so much for your precious time stopping by! Big hugs!

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 10/10/2014 10:46:00 PM

Very nice! Enjoy the read. Good luck in the challenge! ;) Love peace and light!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2014 1:28:00 AM

Thank you so much my dear friend Dorian (a poet who created/introduced the sonnetina rispetto form of poem). Big hugs!