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October Bliss

Over-burdened trees
Proudly shy of pregnancies
Would-be mothers of cherries.
October wind runs
Leaves fall to lay bed to rest
In bliss after the labor.

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October 9, 2014
Form: Sedoka
Sixth Place win
Contest: October Bliss by Andrea

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Len Gasun Date: 10/13/2014 3:18:00 AM Wow! Amazing poem my dear friend Dr. Ram. The richness of nature on this birth month of Librans! So love it! I also love the picture! Many congrats as well on your great win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 10/12/2014 3:25:00 PM Nice metaphors, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in October Bliss. Sandra Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 10/12/2014 10:31:00 AM Congrats on your win Dr Ram Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/12/2014 9:17:00 AM And back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram! Login to Reply

John Lawless Date: 10/12/2014 8:51:00 AM Very imaginative and unique take on the theme. Well done. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/12/2014 5:39:00 AM dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Mohan Chutani Date: 10/12/2014 4:38:00 AM nice images of preparations for procreation by nature, Dr. Ram. Congrats. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/12/2014 12:44:00 AM Dr. Ram, the idea of your poem is so unique. For originality I loved it. The last part, a fantastic ending, bliss after labor. YUP!! Congrats in my contest. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 10/11/2014 4:55:00 AM Great unique take on this seasonal theme, Dr. Your personified trees merit the most adorable offspring. // paul Login to Reply Paul Callus Date: 10/12/2014 7:14:00 AM ...back with deserved congratulations! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 10/9/2014 8:16:00 AM Wow an amazing one Dr Ram! Surely a winner! Best wishes! Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 10/9/2014 4:33:00 AM beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Earl Schumacker Date: 10/9/2014 2:43:00 AM Good morning Dr. Mehta, Strangely delightful poem. A very interesting composition. Really creative images with an abundance of life and energy. Keep up the good work. Earl Login to Reply

Ravi Sathasivam Date: 10/9/2014 2:13:00 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs Login to Reply