Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Sedoka

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October Bliss

Over-burdened trees
Proudly shy of pregnancies
Would-be mothers of cherries.
October wind runs
Leaves fall to lay bed to rest
In bliss after the labor.

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October 9, 2014
Form: Sedoka
Sixth Place win
Contest: October Bliss by Andrea

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Len Gasun October 13, 2014 at 3:18 AM Wow! Amazing poem my dear friend Dr. Ram. The richness of nature on this birth month of Librans! So love it! I also love the picture! Many congrats as well on your great win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Sandra Haight October 12, 2014 at 3:25 PM Nice metaphors, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in October Bliss. Sandra

Joseph May October 12, 2014 at 10:31 AM Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 9:17 AM And back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram!

John Lawless October 12, 2014 at 8:51 AM Very imaginative and unique take on the theme. Well done.

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:39 AM dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx

Mohan Chutani October 12, 2014 at 4:38 AM nice images of preparations for procreation by nature, Dr. Ram. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:44 AM Dr. Ram, the idea of your poem is so unique. For originality I loved it. The last part, a fantastic ending, bliss after labor. YUP!! Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus October 11, 2014 at 4:55 AM Great unique take on this seasonal theme, Dr. Your personified trees merit the most adorable offspring. // paul Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 7:14 AM ...back with deserved congratulations! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 9, 2014 at 8:16 AM Wow an amazing one Dr Ram! Surely a winner! Best wishes!

Jan Allison October 9, 2014 at 4:33 AM beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker October 9, 2014 at 2:43 AM Good morning Dr. Mehta, Strangely delightful poem. A very interesting composition. Really creative images with an abundance of life and energy. Keep up the good work. Earl

Ravi Sathasivam October 9, 2014 at 2:13 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs