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Cherry Trees

Over-burdened trees Proudly shy of pregnancies Would-be mothers of cherries. October wind runs Leaves fall to lay bed to rest In bliss after the labor. +++ October 9, 2014 Form: Sedoka Sixth Place win Contest: October Bliss by Andrea

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Len Gasun

Date: 10/13/2014 3:18:00 AM

Wow! Amazing poem my dear friend Dr. Ram. The richness of nature on this birth month of Librans! So love it! I also love the picture! Many congrats as well on your great win! Hugs and cheers! love lots, Leonora

Sandra Haight

Date: 10/12/2014 3:25:00 PM

Nice metaphors, Dr. Ram. Congratulations on your win in October Bliss. Sandra

Joseph May

Date: 10/12/2014 10:31:00 AM

Congrats on your win Dr Ram

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 9:17:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats Dr Ram!

John Lawless

Date: 10/12/2014 8:51:00 AM

Very imaginative and unique take on the theme. Well done.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:39:00 AM

dropping back with my congratulations:-) hugs jan xx

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/12/2014 4:38:00 AM

nice images of preparations for procreation by nature, Dr. Ram. Congrats.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:44:00 AM

Dr. Ram, the idea of your poem is so unique. For originality I loved it. The last part, a fantastic ending, bliss after labor. YUP!! Congrats in my contest.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/11/2014 4:55:00 AM

Great unique take on this seasonal theme, Dr. Your personified trees merit the most adorable offspring. // paul

Paul Callus
Date: 10/12/2014 7:14:00 AM

...back with deserved congratulations! // paul

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/9/2014 8:16:00 AM

Wow an amazing one Dr Ram! Surely a winner! Best wishes!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2014 4:33:00 AM

beautifully penned - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Earl Schumacker

Date: 10/9/2014 2:43:00 AM

Good morning Dr. Mehta, Strangely delightful poem. A very interesting composition. Really creative images with an abundance of life and energy. Keep up the good work. Earl

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/9/2014 2:13:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed. Tfs