Pandita Sietesantos Poet Sijo

October Bliss

October Bliss

In the mood for autumnal cavorting and carousing,
dripping with morning dew drops and blowing moist kisses at rainbows,
golden leaves flit about wind-swept paths searching for dancing partners.



10-08-2014

Contest:      October Bliss or November Dreams/Sijo or Sedoka
Sponsor:     Andrea Dietrich
Placement:  3rd

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Carol Mays March 5, 2015 at 9:10 PM Magical, beautiful, and clever. Pandita Sietesantos March 6, 2015 at 3:13 PM Hi Carol, thank you so much for stopping by with you wonderful compliments which I very much appreciate! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Eve Roper November 6, 2014 at 5:12 PM wonderful write Pandita; I can just see the leaves floating in the morning dew :) love and hugs eve Pandita Sietesantos November 6, 2014 at 6:55 PM Hi Eve, thank you dear friend for your sweet compliments as always! Warmest regards. Pandita

Cupids Arrow October 26, 2014 at 9:12 AM Beautiful!! CT Pandita Sietesantos October 26, 2014 at 6:11 PM Cupid, thank you for honoring me with your wonderful compliments, my friend! I appreciate your visit and encouragement! Warmest regards. Pandita "

Harry Horsman October 15, 2014 at 5:14 PM Oh the visual aspects are amazing.. Pandita Sietesantos October 17, 2014 at 11:14 PM Hi Harry, thank you for stopping by with you kind compliments and continued support which I very much appreciate! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 8:56 AM And back again wid huge congrats on this awesome winning write Pandita! Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 2:48 PM Dr. Upma, many thanks for your wonderful compliments as usual! Pandita

John Lawless October 12, 2014 at 8:55 AM WHAT A PARTY!!! This is a lively, exciting, take on the bliss and dreams. Fantastic imagery, I can see the leaves shyly asking "Would you like to dance?" Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 2:47 PM These leaves are certainly living it up! Yeah! Thanks so much for complimenting this piece, John! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus October 12, 2014 at 6:30 AM Great imagery, Pandita! Love the idea of leaves looking for dancing partners. Congrats on a very merited win. Hugs // paul Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 8:35 AM Thank you so very much, dear Paul for your continued encouragement and support! I appreciate the wonderful compliments. Pandita

Maurice Yvonne October 12, 2014 at 6:17 AM A wonderful write. Congratulations on your win. Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 8:36 AM Many thanks, Maurice for your compliments and congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:28 AM dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) hugs jan xxx Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 8:34 AM Thank you, thank you, Jan! Pandita

Mohan Chutani October 12, 2014 at 4:12 AM Pandita, great romantic imagination in festival of natural colours. Congrats. Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 8:33 AM Hi Mohan, thank you for stopping by with you kind compliments which I very much appreciate! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:53 AM nice flight of imagination, Pandita, congrats Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 8:31 AM Thank you kindly Dr. Ram for your compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:28 AM Pandita , this is so pretty. It reminded me of the way Nette writes, and that is a great compliment on your imagery. Congrats to you. Pandita Sietesantos October 12, 2014 at 8:30 AM Andrea, thank you for the wonderful compliment and for honoring me with such a placement in your contest! Warmest regards. Pandita

Bohari Mohammad October 11, 2014 at 7:23 AM It is beautiful..and fabulous imagination...Great Write Pandita Sietesantos October 11, 2014 at 12:05 PM Hi Bohari, many thanks for your great compliments which I so very much appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala October 9, 2014 at 3:30 PM Pandita, I love this beautifully penned poem! Kika Pandita Sietesantos October 9, 2014 at 3:47 PM Many thanks, Kika. I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 9, 2014 at 8:18 AM Wow a fabulous write Pandita! Gl in contest! Pandita Sietesantos October 9, 2014 at 3:46 PM Dr. Upma, thank you for stopping by with you kind compliments which I very much appreciate! Pandita

Casarah Nance October 8, 2014 at 8:01 PM That sounds so seductive and alluring, what a dance them leaves make, well done lady you and your poetry is gorgeous :) Pandita Sietesantos October 9, 2014 at 3:45 PM Thank you so very much, dear Casarah for your continued encouragement and support! I appreciate the wonderful compliments. Pandita

Jan Allison October 8, 2014 at 7:21 PM simply stunning imagery ! - Andrea will love this I am sure Pandita! good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx Pandita Sietesantos October 8, 2014 at 7:35 PM Hi Jan, thank you so very much for your lovely compliments and always encouraging comments! Have a wonderful day! Pandita