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October Bliss

October Bliss In the mood for autumnal cavorting and carousing, dripping with morning dew drops and blowing moist kisses at rainbows, golden leaves flit about wind-swept paths searching for dancing partners. 10-08-2014 Contest: October Bliss or November Dreams/Sijo or Sedoka Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Placement: 3rd

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Carol Mays

Date: 3/5/2015 9:10:00 PM

Magical, beautiful, and clever.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 3/6/2015 3:13:00 PM

Hi Carol, thank you so much for stopping by with you wonderful compliments which I very much appreciate! Have a great weekend! Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 11/6/2014 5:12:00 PM

wonderful write Pandita; I can just see the leaves floating in the morning dew :) love and hugs eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 11/6/2014 6:55:00 PM

Hi Eve, thank you dear friend for your sweet compliments as always! Warmest regards. Pandita

Cupids Arrow

Date: 10/26/2014 9:12:00 AM

Beautiful!! CT

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/26/2014 6:11:00 PM

Cupid, thank you for honoring me with your wonderful compliments, my friend! I appreciate your visit and encouragement! Warmest regards. Pandita "

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/15/2014 5:14:00 PM

Oh the visual aspects are amazing..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/17/2014 11:14:00 PM

Hi Harry, thank you for stopping by with you kind compliments and continued support which I very much appreciate! Have a wonderful weekend! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/12/2014 8:56:00 AM

And back again wid huge congrats on this awesome winning write Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 2:48:00 PM

Dr. Upma, many thanks for your wonderful compliments as usual! Pandita

John Lawless

Date: 10/12/2014 8:55:00 AM

WHAT A PARTY!!! This is a lively, exciting, take on the bliss and dreams. Fantastic imagery, I can see the leaves shyly asking "Would you like to dance?"

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 2:47:00 PM

These leaves are certainly living it up! Yeah! Thanks so much for complimenting this piece, John! Warmest regards. Pandita

Paul Callus

Date: 10/12/2014 6:30:00 AM

Great imagery, Pandita! Love the idea of leaves looking for dancing partners. Congrats on a very merited win. Hugs // paul

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 8:35:00 AM

Thank you so very much, dear Paul for your continued encouragement and support! I appreciate the wonderful compliments. Pandita

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 10/12/2014 6:17:00 AM

A wonderful write. Congratulations on your win.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 8:36:00 AM

Many thanks, Maurice for your compliments and congratulations! Warmest regards. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:28:00 AM

dropping back with my congrats Pandita:-) hugs jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, thank you, Jan! Pandita

Mohan Chutani

Date: 10/12/2014 4:12:00 AM

Pandita, great romantic imagination in festival of natural colours. Congrats.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 8:33:00 AM

Hi Mohan, thank you for stopping by with you kind compliments which I very much appreciate! Pandita

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 1:53:00 AM

nice flight of imagination, Pandita, congrats

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 8:31:00 AM

Thank you kindly Dr. Ram for your compliments! Warmest regards. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:28:00 AM

Pandita , this is so pretty. It reminded me of the way Nette writes, and that is a great compliment on your imagery. Congrats to you.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/12/2014 8:30:00 AM

Andrea, thank you for the wonderful compliment and for honoring me with such a placement in your contest! Warmest regards. Pandita

Bohari Mohammad

Date: 10/11/2014 7:23:00 AM

It is beautiful..and fabulous imagination...Great Write

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/11/2014 12:05:00 PM

Hi Bohari, many thanks for your great compliments which I so very much appreciate! Warmest regards. Pandita

Kika Ayala

Date: 10/9/2014 3:30:00 PM

Pandita, I love this beautifully penned poem! Kika

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/9/2014 3:47:00 PM

Many thanks, Kika. I am very happy that you enjoyed this one! Pandita

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/9/2014 8:18:00 AM

Wow a fabulous write Pandita! Gl in contest!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/9/2014 3:46:00 PM

Dr. Upma, thank you for stopping by with you kind compliments which I very much appreciate! Pandita

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/8/2014 8:01:00 PM

That sounds so seductive and alluring, what a dance them leaves make, well done lady you and your poetry is gorgeous :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/9/2014 3:45:00 PM

Thank you so very much, dear Casarah for your continued encouragement and support! I appreciate the wonderful compliments. Pandita

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 7:21:00 PM

simply stunning imagery ! - Andrea will love this I am sure Pandita! good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xxx

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 10/8/2014 7:35:00 PM

Hi Jan, thank you so very much for your lovely compliments and always encouraging comments! Have a wonderful day! Pandita