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October Bliss

Cooling temperatures cause the leaves to turn colors, But the temperatures climb again during Indian Summer. Multi-colored leaves are the last fanfare before winter.

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Jan Allison

Date: 10/12/2014 5:43:00 AM

popping back with my congrats mark:-) hugs Jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2014 5:30:00 AM

Nicely worded write on October, Mark, congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/12/2014 12:54:00 AM

A very matter of fact picture of the fall, Mark. Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 10/9/2014 8:20:00 AM

Love this sijo Mark! It's captivating ! Gl in contest!

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/9/2014 1:33:00 PM

Thanks Dr. S. Sort of a long phrased style, isn't it.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/8/2014 6:34:00 PM

Beautiful sijo Mark I particularly like the final line:-) I have tried this form for the first time myself:-)hugs Jan xx

Mark J. Halliday
Date: 10/9/2014 1:34:00 PM

Thanks. I thought the last line was the only significant part to it too.