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Mark J. Halliday

October Bliss

Cooling temperatures cause the leaves to turn colors,
But the temperatures climb again during Indian Summer.
Multi-colored leaves are the last fanfare before winter.

Copyright © Mark J. Halliday | Year Posted 2014

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October 12, 2014 at 5:43 AM

popping back with my congrats mark:-) hugs Jan xxx

October 12, 2014 at 5:30 AM

Nicely worded write on October, Mark, congrats on the win

Andrea Dietrich

October 12, 2014 at 12:54 AM

A very matter of fact picture of the fall, Mark. Thanks for supporting my contest and congrats on your win!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

October 9, 2014 at 8:20 AM

Love this sijo Mark! It's captivating ! Gl in contest!

Mark J. Halliday

October 9, 2014 at 1:33 PM

Thanks Dr. S. Sort of a long phrased style, isn't it.

October 8, 2014 at 6:34 PM

Beautiful sijo Mark I particularly like the final line:-) I have tried this form for the first time myself:-)hugs Jan xx

Mark J. Halliday

October 9, 2014 at 1:34 PM

Thanks. I thought the last line was the only significant part to it too.

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