Troy Greece Poet Sedoka

October Bliss

each gesture flickers

blazing multicolored tones

huffed breaths sing of olden notes

October shimmers

on marshland pathways bound to gleam

before winter shifts to white



Contest: October Bliss or November Dreams
7 Oct 14

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Poet Destroyer A February 18, 2016 at 9:31 AM wonderful poem. LINDA

Skat A November 18, 2015 at 11:31 AM awesome write. SKAT

Nette Onclaud October 12, 2014 at 2:17 PM big cheers to you, troy.. hope to see you more often here.. congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma October 12, 2014 at 9:02 AM Wonderful images here Troy! Congrats on ur winning awesome write!

Maurice Yvonne October 12, 2014 at 5:57 AM I love this write, Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Jan Allison October 12, 2014 at 5:31 AM dropping back with my congrats:-) hugs jan xxx

Dr.Ram Mehta October 12, 2014 at 1:56 AM Lovely write on October bliss, congrats on the win, Troy

Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2014 at 12:31 AM Hey Troy . Not sure if I have ever seen your work before, but if this is any indicatio of your talent, it really rocks!! Beautiful images for October. Congrats in my contest.

Jan Allison October 7, 2014 at 3:04 PM Stunning imagery in this delightful Sedoka I hope this places well for you in the contest.

Troy Greece October 7, 2014 at 3:00 PM you light this page with such glimmer, troy.. i like the end line.. huggs

Charmaine Chircop October 7, 2014 at 2:58 PM Enchanting and Beautifully blissed!!!