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October Afternoons

The sun darts its rays
with every last bit of strength mustered
precious toasty days most glorious
it waves a lingering forget-me-not
a little something to recall

Delightfully warm baking slow mode
umbers reds oranges and yellows
colours of love breathe at their mellowest
a gentle sensuous kiss goodbye
spiced with a hint of illicit magic
yearning for a simmering embrace
that will last forever and a day

Wanting to capture divine moments
make them last throughout eternity
so press the pause button
warp the fabric of time
reshape our memories of yesterdays.



Lineku: 3 stanzas 5-7-5 lines of 5 or 7 words

AP: Honorable Mention 2025
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 5:55 PM
loved the flow and the beautiful imagery of this poem. October afternoons are delightful....faving.
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 10:22 PM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Sara ~
Goldsmith Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 10:01 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "October Afternoons" is a lovely write with a pretty picture. Great Ending. I love October. Have a wonderful day writing away..................
Gauthier Avatar
October 13, 2025 at 11:26 AM
Thank you very much, Paula ~ most appreciated
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