October

diamond coated grass
	cloudy breath on frosted pane
	the winter beckons

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Keith Bickerstaffe

December 20, 2015 at 8:13 PM

A well structured HAIKU (575) with gorgeous language/imagery. I could FEEL the cold! Well done my friend... Keith

Viv Wigley

December 20, 2015 at 8:29 PM

Thanks, Keith. Little chance of frosted panes thus far, though. Regards, Viv

James Inman

October 18, 2015 at 1:38 PM

So adept at this form. Love your Haiku.

Paul Callus

October 17, 2015 at 4:51 PM

Excellent haiku, Viv! Love the imagery, and the picture, too. [ Heard you have a lot on your plate at the moment, my friend. All the best and take care. ] // paul

Viv Wigley

October 18, 2015 at 11:41 AM

Thanks Paul, yes, a busy time at present, but will get to touch base shortly. Hope you are well. Regards, Viv

Duke Beaufort

October 17, 2015 at 11:21 AM

You have a beautiful view, sir. And yes, we are all so lucky/fortunate/blessed to experience a brief bit of the good life. I hope that you and I have much more of it in store for us prior to our flights out of here.

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2015 at 8:16 PM

oh my, this is the most beautiful short poem I have read today!!! very creative.

Viv Wigley

October 16, 2015 at 10:42 PM

Thanks Andrea, I guess it'll be a while yet until Utah sees a good frost.... Hugs, Viv x

Andrea Dietrich

October 16, 2015 at 8:16 PM

love the picture too.

Julia Ward

October 16, 2015 at 1:56 AM

It does indeed... A nice write, Viv. Julia, xx

Julia Ward

October 18, 2015 at 11:48 AM

Yes, I'm fine thanks, Viv... As you say, winter subjects will occupy us soon. Julia, xx

Viv Wigley

October 18, 2015 at 11:44 AM

..... and on the upside, poets will switch to winter mode, and I'll have to put my keyboard warmer on :). Thanks for dropping by, Julia, hope you're OK. Viv x

Arthur Vaso

October 15, 2015 at 11:09 PM

What a stunning poem and photo, I tip my hat to you!

Viv Wigley

October 16, 2015 at 12:47 AM

Thanks Arthur, my warmer clothes have had their moths evicted- I'm all set. Regards, Viv

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 14, 2015 at 3:17 AM

- Autumn is truly arrived, just before frost at night now - A wonderful haiku, Viv! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Viv Wigley

October 14, 2015 at 11:44 PM

Thanks, Anne Lise, it won't be long now- the thick woolly clothes in my wardrobe are all moving to the front, in readiness- which is spooky :O . Klems, Viv x