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October  Acrostic

O...October is a beautiful month.
C...Colorful it will be.
T...The trees change color and the leaves start to fall'
O...On the ground they form a beautiful carpet.
B...By the moonlight - they shine.
E...Everyone can enjoy their beauty.
R...Red, orange, green, yellow and brown are the 
      colors of this month.

                October Moon

The guitars were playing a tune under the
October moon. It was the middle of the night.
The guitars were shining by the moon light.
They were playing their tune and you started to 
sing a song, called - October Moon.... 

10/12/2013
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Poet Destroyer A

January 14, 2014 at 11:33 AM

Lucy, thank you for your last comments... ~ Did you really think I'd leave without stopping by to say Good-bye. Never, Muwahahahaha! Why the word alone sounds -forever and difficult. LOL, I love this place and the poets. A couple of soup friends and I are taking a short vacation. REMEMBER! The Best Thing About Leaving is the "RETURN." I will leave in good faith, in hopes you don't forget me, and you are looking forward in having me visit you and your poems in the future. HAHA, I will bring a new me when I return. "I Can't wait to see you again:) If you ever want me to read a certain poem or you wish to say hi... Drop by my E-Mail Address. [email protected] :) Sincerely yours ~Always & Forever~ The Sweet Poet Destroyer

Patrick Boyle

November 24, 2013 at 12:53 AM

I really like the images that come to mind. Also enjoyed the style shifting.

Voahanitriniaina Rabary-Andriamanday

October 19, 2013 at 3:37 PM

Acrostic and romantic blue song. Let me dream and imagine it was a blue moon... Makes me feel like crying; this is a soft killing... before recovering from illness and awakening in a great relief of the sadness and pain... Thanks for sharing this very beautiful poem, dear Lucy! Love, Hanitra

Joseph Matose

October 16, 2013 at 9:28 AM

Great acrostic poem. I'll learn to write one. Thanks for sharing. JM

Bl Devnath

October 15, 2013 at 11:52 AM

Just beautiful of October. Beautifully pictured, my friend. Loved always, bl

Poet Destroyer A

October 14, 2013 at 9:19 PM

I love the poem Lucy, October's such a beautiful month... love the sound, and free lance feeling under this October Moon... always~ Linda

Liam Mcdaid

October 14, 2013 at 1:57 PM

so very beautiful in smiling sunshine

Cherl Dunn

October 14, 2013 at 9:38 AM

Very beautiful fall poem it made go outside and take a walk just to enjoy the leaves and sunshine. Thank you for sharing your poem and commits.

Harry Horsman

October 14, 2013 at 7:12 AM

not only beautiful, but very clever poetry,,, just love this. Lucilla...

Sara Kendrick

October 13, 2013 at 6:37 PM

Enjoyed reading your creative lines fitted into this acrostic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Jon A Cavanaugh

October 13, 2013 at 10:50 AM

What a lovely acrostic. We are having such wonderful October weather here in Ohio . I hope you are having a wonderful October as well.

Andrea Dietrich

October 13, 2013 at 8:48 AM

sweet October poetry. I prefer September when it is warmer but October is prettier!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

October 13, 2013 at 8:25 AM

- Here we had a rarely beautiful in October this year ..... sunny, slightly crisp air and many beautiful colors. - Thank you for this beautiful poem Lucilla! - Have a nice autumn Sunday. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Ravi Sathasivam

October 13, 2013 at 8:04 AM

Excellent. Nice words. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Demetrios Trifiatis

October 13, 2013 at 3:36 AM

That is October and certainly deserves to be serenated by the moon! Well done, Lucilla! Thank you!

Honestly J.T.

October 13, 2013 at 12:12 AM

I love the image of October depicted through your poetry. Well done

Russell Sivey

October 12, 2013 at 10:24 PM

I don't know Spanish but I know enough to say muy bien, amiga (very good, friend) This is a tremendous write, I surely loved reading this lovely poem this evening! What a terrific piece, Great Work!!