October

Crackling leaf carpets,
Static chill touches the neck,
Autumn, bids farewell.

natureseasonstimehaiku

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Carol Sunshine Brown

August 2, 2011 at 9:32 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Aseem. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

Elaine George

August 2, 2011 at 3:23 AM

Sensational Haiku, Aseem. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

Carol Sunshine Brown

November 1, 2010 at 9:45 AM

Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Aseem. Love, Carol

Fabiyas M V

October 30, 2010 at 11:18 AM

Dear Aseem,I like the way you welcme winter.Small and fair.Fabiyas

Carol Sunshine Brown

October 30, 2010 at 11:16 AM

May your weekend be one of amazing inspiration Aseem. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love and blessings always, Carol