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October

Crackling leaf carpets, Static chill touches the neck, Autumn, bids farewell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/2/2011 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Aseem. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/2/2011 3:23:00 AM
Sensational Haiku, Aseem. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie
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Date: 11/1/2010 9:45:00 AM
Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Aseem. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:18:00 AM
Dear Aseem,I like the way you welcme winter.Small and fair.Fabiyas
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Date: 10/30/2010 11:16:00 AM
May your weekend be one of amazing inspiration Aseem. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today and thank you so much for sharing it with us. Love and blessings always, Carol
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Date: 10/30/2010 7:39:00 AM
Nice use of personification and imagery for a creative view. Keep on writing and sharing your words. Karen
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Date: 10/29/2010 4:00:00 PM
Creative write to say goodbye autumn and welcome winter which is round the corner, Aseem
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Date: 10/29/2010 2:45:00 PM
WOW, Im shocked I am the first to comment on this beautifully written Haiku...Michael
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