October

October exhales
Cool crisp air through dappled peace
Over autumn fire
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Miller Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 1:56 AM
This is an excellent Haiku!
Delegans Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Terry.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 3:55 PM
a totally captivating Haiku--written as it should be.
Delegans Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 5:48 PM
That's a nice compliment. Thank you, Sara.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 8:11 AM
Your "October" is a wonderful Haiku write for this wonderful month. I love this time of the year. Sending You Autumn Blessings As You Write Away..............
Delegans Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 5:47 PM
So much great stuff in the fall. Thanks for sharing your kind words with me, Paula.
Greenhough Avatar
October 19, 2025 at 12:47 AM
I enjoy your description of October in warm , outdoor haiku. The weather is cool but perfect, isn't it?
Delegans Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 5:46 PM
My favorite season! Thanks for reading, Hilda!
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