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October

Spry scenes bid farewell to the fall. From far, there's winter's callous call. Dry leaves float like gold butterflies. Thrill fills the rainbow-painted skies. A divine calm is spread around. In nature, there's a salsa sound. Like wedding choirs, are the birds' cries Thrill fills the rainbow-painted skies. Changing moods of the scenes are seen. Earth is graced with emerald-green Are the sun and moon in guile guise? Thrill fills the rainbow-painted skies. With the blow of the breeze, reeds sway. Are these bright clouds gathered to pray? The moon slowly changes its size. Thrill fills the rainbow-painted skies. Are these swift, sassy cherubims? What, in this weather, are their whims? Creatures seem free of earthly ties. Thrill fills the rainbow-painted skies

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Date: 11/20/2023 6:55:00 AM
I am thrilled by your poem Christuraj. Great from "spry scenes" to "earthly ties". Congratulations! :)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/20/2023 9:39:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/20/2023 6:12:00 AM
Hi, Christuraj. Congrats on your well-deserved and well-designed win. Blessings.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/20/2023 9:39:00 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/19/2023 9:06:00 PM
Congrats to you. This is amazing writing. Love it. God bless you too. Love, Gina
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/19/2023 9:26:00 PM
Thank you very much for giving me an opportunity to take part in your contest. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/19/2023 6:23:00 PM
Dear Christuraj, your poetic portrayal of October is filled with amazing imagery and beauty. Stunning verse throughout, but I especially admired these, "Dry leaves float like gold butterflies" and "Are the sun and moon in guile guise?" and "Are these bright clouds gathered to pray?" - breathtaking images my friend. Congratulations for your win in Gina's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/19/2023 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/19/2023 3:42:00 PM
Christuraj, your vividly descriptive, expressive kyrielle made me smile! CONGRATS on your win. Janice
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/19/2023 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 11/19/2023 9:33:00 AM
Wow! beautiful poem! the last stanza is just wonderful! Congrats on your win!!
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/19/2023 7:00:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
Date: 10/30/2023 1:39:00 PM
an outstanding Kyrielle! I truly liked the opening stanza as well as the use of the word 'spry.' Your rhyme scheme flows to another effectively and smoothly. October is my favorite month. Have a splendid day, Sara
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 11/19/2023 7:01:00 PM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!

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