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October

october promise leaves of gold, rust and maroon crunch beneath my feet october whispers breathless in the chilly air of autumn’s swift kiss october memoirs touch upon the sky so blue with wings going south october assures reflections of lovely hopes for frosty mornings October 4, 2019 October Contest 45 or Less Words Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger
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Rodrigues Avatar
October 24, 2019 at 11:19 AM
Congrats, Gina!
Wolf Avatar
October 22, 2019 at 8:54 PM
Lovely penned, Gina, and I just love the way you framed each stanza with October and then alternating noun and verb. Very, very nice! Congrats on your win in Caren's contest. Warm October wishes, Gershon
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 7:49 PM
this is a very cool quartet of haiku, so descriptive, Regina. Congrats on your win!
Gauthier Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 3:24 PM
Love the symmetry of your top winning poem. Congrats, Gina.
Canerdy Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 12:05 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your win, Regina. LOVELY poem! Janice
Chiri Avatar
October 21, 2019 at 9:24 AM
Regina this was a beautiful win!;)
Perrin Avatar
October 6, 2019 at 1:02 PM
Lovely Regina, good luck in the contest :-) x
Green Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:49 AM
I loved this Gina. You have certainly captured the essence of the fall season in this wonderfully crafted poem. Best wishes in the contest
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:24 PM
Thank you, Chris. You're a blessing and I appreciate your words of encouragement. Bless you
Babbit Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 10:21 AM
Nicely written, good luck in the contest.
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Thank you so much and blessings
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:26 AM
Lovely! My best to you in the contest Regina. xomo
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 9:23 PM
Thank you so much. God bless you
Michael Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 5:19 AM
A sweet little write...enjoyed the read
Mcintosh Avatar
October 4, 2019 at 7:13 AM
Thanks tons. I appreciate your reading and commenting - Bless you
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