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When varnished leaves quake overhead And jasmines in their airbrushed red, Match the whippoorwill as it sings Our notes flit on through elder wings-- Into duskfall , an ardor's rite Through October’s final delight: We watch autumn cast her paints high Till stars wane from love's lullaby. ```` Free Verse Or Rhyme Poetry In Its Beauty Eve Roper's Contest 04.11.2019 Pic # 3 Revised

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/25/2019 11:23:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/24/2019 3:50:00 PM

A beautiful win. Congratulations :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/24/2019 3:44:00 PM

It is stunning. Congratulations on your win. xxoo

Eve Roper

Date: 4/23/2019 7:38:00 PM

Nette, congratulations on your win in my contest with this creative Rhyme of Vienna and her husband Aldo! The imagery and flow are beautiful. Hugs Eve ~`*

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 4/18/2019 7:07:00 PM

Hello Nette … although we live in opposite hemispheres, we still have that sad feeling when saying farewell to autumn. It's such a lovely time of the year - thank you Nette - Lindsay

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/12/2019 11:21:00 PM

Eve is going to love this one; your imagery is terrific, and she loves imagery; you are both wonderful at this kind of a poem.

Honestly J.T.

Date: 4/12/2019 10:54:00 PM

Nice -JT

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/12/2019 2:45:00 AM

This is brilliant writing, Nette, mine is much simpler:)

Lawrence Sharp

Date: 4/12/2019 12:27:00 AM

Beautifully written, Nette. The first line is brilliant, and sets the tone perfectly for the whole poem.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 4/11/2019 10:50:00 PM

You have a perfect entry here Nette! What aesthetic wonders! : ) xxoo

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 4/11/2019 7:13:00 PM

Beauty splashes in this sweet verse of yours in every line like the musical notes which moves our heart and binds us for a long time. It should be a top winner in the contest dear friend. My Good wishes for your beautiful poem....love and best wishes always dear friend Nette..... Ravindra

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 4/11/2019 5:20:00 PM

This splendid verse will certainly rate at the top of the winner's list, nette. My kind of poetry! Glad you liked the epitaph for Cecil the Magician. Another you might like: "Here resides butcher Clyde who cheated on his wife: She was also quite adept at wielding a butcher's knife!"

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/11/2019 4:06:00 PM

October, kicks off the autumn, I must say I do love the autumn season, love to see the beautiful colours. Tom