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Octaves Of Love

Written: May 14, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Unseeking Seeker 
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July 5th for a contest Sponsored by: Rob Carmack

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Line of inquiry: “joy, empathy, compassion on an upward arc an effervescence eternal causes bliss ignition to start.”
************************ In the hush of pre-dawn breath, joy stirs as a wisp— a silent ember-glow, a tremor of warmth, a whisper brushing the inner dark, buried in the heart’s core as something waiting for the world to exhale. A filament of light shivers awake, a quiet electric spark as if the universe breathes roused the sleeping earth— beneath skin, a listening pulse gathering its moment to rise. Empathy enters as a low hum, a warm current threading through fibers of being, renewing the still, shadow-soft sanctuaries where sorrow once lingered and tenderness completes What silence could not. Compassion blooms in a sudden rush— a spectrum unbound, a rainbow spilled across the cosmos’ canvas, child-bright and fearless, coloring every corner of the waking soul with its tremulous smile. Before the soul ascends, There is a breathless pause— a flash of clarity, an epiphany caught mid-flight in the heart’s unfolding arc, like northern lights whispering their secret syntax of grace. Effervescence rises— not as bubbles, but as the ancient light of creation, a timeless force moving without sound, drawing hidden fears into its widening glow. You notice it only when breath lifts of its own accord— an intangible ballet between the body and the unseen, as rivers meet the sea in quiet reconciliation. And then it ignites— in a spark of ecstasy swelling to an unslakable blaze, its brightness exploding through the adjunct of gloom, making the cosmos a canvas of amazement. It quaffs the night, forms a beacon of purpose— Love accumulates a grain of brilliance bursting forth, passion penetrates deep as warmth into stone. It is not peace that falls from the heavens, It grows from the soil— a quiet, constant song resonating from beneath, as constant as the light of day, as gentle and soft as a lullaby of night. The strength of a whisper That will not be silent— a voice that comes in leaves, in waves, in the gentle insistence of wind. A vision of the fire that burns within, a fire that cannot be quenched, a fire that cannot stop searching, a fire that cannot be darkened, the hidden chambers of the soul.
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Carmack Avatar
August 1, 2026 at 5:55 AM
Ah, the silver lining of a NA to make this a most fitting piece for my contest. My regards and thanks Mr. Sotto.
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August 1, 2026 at 6:10 AM
Rob, I'm grateful. I value your objective assessment, comments, and the wonderful placement in your contest 😊👍🌹.
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