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Oceans of Gold

Swaying with the wind, Rustling wheat heads of the fields; Waves of golden grain.

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Date: 6/14/2009 4:24:00 PM

What a beautiful and creative view. I reallly like the last line. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. Karen

Derrick Burton

Date: 6/14/2009 12:33:00 PM

short and beautiful, you area haiku king huh? enjoy your sunday.

Sharon Winter

Date: 6/13/2009 3:56:00 PM

Always makes me wish I lived in the prairies when I read words like this. Just undeniably beautiful. Love, Shar

Valerie Bellefleur

Date: 6/13/2009 3:47:00 PM

Living in the praries, I can see and hear this very well...

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/13/2009 2:33:00 PM

i love this view,you picture it so well--beautiful,and by the way you write golden my good friend--------charma

James Fraser

Date: 6/13/2009 11:58:00 AM

Raul, i can just see the fields swaying like arms responding to a ballad at a concert, wow - James

Michael Jordan

Date: 6/13/2009 10:59:00 AM

Raul you know I used to work the Harvest every year I would take a leave from my regular job as a eq. operator/ pipe fitter to do it because its just a blessing to the soul - God Bless you my friend, MJ

Christopher Higgins

Date: 6/13/2009 10:58:00 AM

Raul, when is the well going to run dry?...LOL...i guess as long as nature produces these gems, your pen will keep on flowing...brilliant piece.